Minor changes of plan. Rather than distracting the main body of defenders with a minefield, indirect LRMs, and threat of a major action to the front, and then attacking the rear and shooting at easy targets with a fast strike group, I would switch the secondary attack to primarily target the ammo carriers around the artillery, and the artillery itself (SRMs would be ideal, Medium Lasers also good). If still heavily guarded, divert the secondary group to hit the less well covered rear elements of the convoy instead, as originally planned. As before, don't get bogged down in a fight, hit and run. Immobilized targets are as good as kills, and vehicles are easier to immobilize. If easier shots on the 'Mechs than on the vehicles present themselves, take them, because any damage uses up whatever remaining supplies the convoy does manage to get through.
Taking out the ammo carriers might also damage or destroy surrounding units, including the artillery, and artillery with only their onboard ammo supplies would be a lot less of a threat, once the ammo carriers are gone. Ideally, immobilizing a couple of those guns with an SRM hit to tracks or suspension (or a nearby ammo explosion) would force the opponent to either:
A) blow them up to prevent capture
B) halt the convoy for several hours for repairs (repair rolls in the field without extended time would be brutal) while under sporadic attack
C) abandon them for later capture by the rebels or mercs.
Any of those would be a big positive for the rebels.
The sheer size of the defending force rules out a major direct engagement against the unified group, so the only options are delays (mines, obstacles, and forced deployment for combat that doesn't happen), constant harassment attacks (mostly indirect fire, where any return fire will be unspotted), a fast hit-and-run attack (to kill or cripple the cargo carriers or artillery group), or various combinations of the above.
Ideally, the merc unit should be prepared at a couple of points (if/when conditions favor it) to engage a smaller portion of the defenders (a Merc unit doesn't stand to gain from an even battle), if they can be induced to pursue with a fraction of their force, and prepared to send in fast hovers and light 'mechs in a series of fast slash attacks against the poorly escorted convoy if the loyalists decide to pursue in force.