Record Sheets: 3055 Upgrade (Print version). Appears to be first printing - no print # or revision text is present on the copyright page. (edit) Print Year: 2011
I'm using a slightly more detailed version of the standard template, so to avoid any confusion..
Pg: Page on which the error occurs
"Title": the section in which, etc. This may be followed by clarifying text, IE " “Skye Tigers” rules text " or " "Skye Tigers" Current Stablemaster "
Paragraphs: listed by number in the section, if any
Line(s): number of lines down in the paragraph (not by page and column) where the error(s) appear.
Error Type: The type of error (typo, math error, rules conflict, incorrect terminology, etc.), and a clarification, IE "Typo (misspelling)" if necessary
"Quoted text showing the error, if necessary"
Revision: The correct text or suggested text to correct the error.
No stylistic concerns are included, unless they change the clear intent of a rule or make the rule ambiguous. I also ignore most grammatical errors.
Pg 7, “Determining Customization Pool”, Lines #3-4
Error type: Typo (inappropriate line break).
Line 3: “..and cross-referencing it on the"
Line 4: "..Customization Pool Table (see p. 6). If the combatants are fighting..”
Revision: Delete offending line break.
Pg 7, “Spending Pool Points”, Paragraph 2, Line #5
Error type: Typo (missing text)
“..for example, costs 20 points [*(4x2).. plus 12 (4x3)..”
Revision: Insert “8” before “(4x2)”
Pg 10, “Customization Costs Table”, Line #9 “Basic Upgrade 3"
Error type: Typo (Missing critical rules content)
Second line of entry is missing: Line reads, “Upgrade Standard Rules armor, structure, gyro, cockpit systems or heat sinks”
Revision: Insert “..to Advanced/Experimental Rules.” on next line
Pg 9, “Team Match”, Lines #11-15
Error type: Typo (Copy-paste error – lines from next paragraph are duplicated)
Revision: Delete all text in section after, “..when more than two teams engage in combat.”
Pg 9, “Tag Team Matches”, Line #10
Error type: Typo (hyphen incorrectly placed)
Revision: Delete hyphen in, “..such units cannot be re-paired,..”
Pg 9, “Tag Team Matches”, Line #11
Error type: Incorrect word choice
“..they can use the rules [b]the[/b] Rearming Under Fire..”
Revision: change highlighted “the” to “for”
[i]Note:both of the above errors also occur in the erroneously copy-pasted section in “Team Match”.[/i]
Pg 9, “Race/Gauntlet Match, Paragraph 3, Lines #2-3 (section line # 18
Error type: Mixed tense, “and” used where a comma is called for
Line 2: “...Both players then roll 1d6 and add their..”
Line 3: “..unit's running MP to the result and multiplying that number..”
Revision:
Should be “Both players then roll 1d6, add their unit's running MP to the result, and multiply that number by..”
OR “Both players then roll 1d6 and add their unit's running MP to the result, multiplying that number by..”
Pg 11, “Variable Planetary Conditions (Optional)”, Lines #2-3
Error type: Typo (inappropriate line break).
Line 2: “..features basic environmental controls that, at..
Line 3: “..the gamemaster's or player's discretion, can simulate combat..”
Revision: delete offending line break.
Note: in addition, the mention of players in this sentence is redundant given the content of the next sentence.
Pg 13, "Acid Pits", paragraph 3, line 1
Error type: Possible Typo (missing word?)
"Any BattleMech that falls into an acid pit hex, or [b]through[/b] any hexes [that are part of the pool]"
As written, no 'Mech that passes its piloting roll moving through the acid pool takes damage - this is obviously not the intent of the rule.
Suggested revision: "..or [b]moves[/b] through.."
Pg 14, image caption.
Error type: Typo (misspelling)
“..stalks his prey at the bottome of the Pool”
Revision: delete final “e” from “bottom”
Pg 21, “Skye Tigers” rules text, Lines #2-3
Error type: Incorrect terminology.
Revision: Change “Level 1” to “Introductory Rules” and “Level 2” to “Standard Rules”
Pg 21, “Tandrek Stables” rules text, Line #4
Error type: Typo (misspelling)
“..for every six full turns the math lasts after the first..”
Revision: change “math” to “match”.
In addition, at the end of paragraph 2, there is an orphaned quotation mark: it should be removed.
