This one was tougher than it looked to put together. I had to balance it so that the IS forces would clearly lose, but the Battle Hawks would perform well. So that meant a lot of missile-heavy Clan 'Mechs, and a tricky balancing act with BV by fine-tuning the piloting and gunnery skills.
It's not a bad scenario, but putting in 6 Battlehawks is bit much, minis wise. Two or three would have been better.
I actually toned it down. The fluff text I based it on called for eight, but I thought that was too much. Besides, this is Battletech, not 40K. Proxy them!
I liked this scenario, i thought the opening blurb was well written and the scenario itself quite interesting. i'll definitely have to play this one out.
I haven't seen the finished product, so I don't know if anything was changed in editing, but I'm glad you liked it. I've got an idea for another scenario, a less traditional one. I'll need to get to work on it.