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p. 16, second paragraph, subject/verb tense:
The first four months of 3151 saw the allied nations...and the Duchy of Andurien faced
Fix:
The first four months of 3151 saw the allied nations...and the Duchy of Andurien face
p. 38, "A Deafening Silence" section, third paragraph, last sentence is apparently missing a word
To that he had to pray the FWL, Fontaine Marik, and the Lyran Commonwealth gave him time.
Suggested fix:
To do that he had to pray the FWL, Fontaine Marik, and the Lyran Commonwealth would give him time.
p. 47, second full paragraph (begins "While the HTI's..."), last sentence has wrong word
With forty-eight hours...
Fix:
Within forty-eight hours...
p. 52, second full paragraph (begins "After securing Danais,...") last character is a comma, should be a period because it's the end of a sentence.
p. 118, 1st Free Worlds Guards Notes: The
Ares superheavy 'Mechs need to have their names italicized.