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Title: 2015-10-30 The Bear's Kin [Lance Scarinci]
Post by: roosterboy on 30 October 2015, 01:36:55
Their party had numbered six at the start.

After a Clawing gone awry, two Ghost Bear warriors must keep their wits about them to survive.

Title: Re: 2015-10-30 The Bear's Kin [Lance Scarinci]
Post by: Sagittaire on 31 October 2015, 12:50:28
Excellent story Lance!

Great insight into the past history of an important player in the BT universe!  O0
Title: Re: 2015-10-30 The Bear's Kin [Lance Scarinci]
Post by: Jal Phoenix on 31 October 2015, 14:54:13
Thanks.  I was a little unsure of the story, until I remembered reading Destiny's call, and how the ending of that story caught me off guard.  Then I knew what my story needed, so I changed the name of my protagonist and gave her a new, necessary identity.  It made much more sense after that. 
Title: Re: 2015-10-30 The Bear's Kin [Lance Scarinci]
Post by: Frabby on 31 October 2015, 15:57:52
Indeed, a very nice story. Thanks for that Jal!
And yes, the reveal at the end does give an already good story that extra bit of polish.
Title: Re: 2015-10-30 The Bear's Kin [Lance Scarinci]
Post by: CungrVanck on 16 November 2015, 09:31:47
Thank you for this story as I really enjoyed it.

Personally, I would love to read more stories like this about the important characters in the universe.  An event that is small as far as the overall plot, but shows a great deal about the character and how their personality was formed.