Interstellar ops, PDF, open beta
First pass copy edit, for grammar and internal consistency. External references to other rulebooks NOT checked.
1. On page 7, first paragraph "Gliese 581c and 581D" should be "Gliese 581c and 581d" to be consistent with other referenced systems.
2. On page 19, High Axial Tilts: first paragraph, first sentence: "guidelineshave" is run together.
3. On page 19, High Axial Tilts: second paragraph, first sentence: "planets" should be "plants".
4. On page 22, left column, third paragraph: "flying mound gravel" should be "flying mounds of gravel".
5. On page 23, right column, fourth paragraph, third sentence: "1-5 20 million x 4D6".
Table says: "1-5 50 million x 4D6"
6. On page 27, right column, first paragraph, second sentence: "The score starts at B"
Table says: "C".
7. On page 27, right column, sixth paragraph, second sentence: "The score starts at B"
Table says: "C".
Note to 6 and 7: The example on page 29 matches the table values, not the text.
8. On page 31, left column, second paragraph: "Dictatorship" should be bold, to match other type headers.
9. On page 32, right column, second paragraph: "Hyper-Pulse Generators" should be bold, to match "Recharge
Stations" on page 33.
robert "silverback" crowe