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« Reply #30 on: 03 August 2024, 11:04:17 »
CHAPTER 8

Jan 20, 3132
Turbline, Continent 2, Plateau, New Research Facility

"Greetings Adept Tony, I am glad you are here to review the report on these night haunts."

"Gladly.  Start with containment.  What is it that was discovered that stops them from clawing their way out?"

"Put it simply.  Crystalline structure resists their claws.  We are still trying to figure out why their claws, teeth, and spines present a hazard to mech and battle armor."

"From this here...  The main crystalline structure is in fact quartz.  Mech armor incorporates diamond in it.  Has this been tested?"

"In fact no.  It was never thought of to be tested.  We never tried diamond crystalline structures to contain them.  I am already thinking about this and I would predict that how they tear thru mech armor suggests it would fail."

"Then if that is the case could quartz be used as a substitute in mech armor?  Thus making a night haunt proof substitute?"

"THAT is an intriguing idea.  There would be sacrifices.  I don't know much about mech armor construction, but I would suppose it would work but would be thicker like ferro fibrous armor.  In either case, pull up file NH80302.  Zoom in on test subject 22.  Based on the reports given by Deback, notice the small twitches on the legs.  Test subject 22 is going to attack test subjects 50-52.  Now pay attention to their reaction."

The night haunt charges three docile ones.  It rips into them killing all three before one of its limbs is severed.  The dying three docile night haunts seem to look dumb struck before the life leaves the corpses.

"Pull up file NH80304.  Look at the limb that is missing.  There is a nub regrowing from the severed area.  The regenerative abilities of these things has never been able to be observed until now."

"You are right.  Due to the containment we have been able to observe.  I still have a hard time believing that quartz crystal would be a containing agent."

"Rightly so Adept Tony.  Now that is just two days.  Pull up file NH80407.  This is three days later."

"By Blake, it is half way grown back!  Nothing we know of regenerates that fast."

"The food intake when they regenerate is higher.  They consume nutrients from anything they can get their hands on when injured.  Fauna and flora are taken in regardless.  Now pull up file NH93444."

A night haunt moves to and from in its crystalline cage.  A tau zombie brings up a squad support laser on an upper deck and fires down onto the night haunt.  Limbs are severed and a small part of the torso.  The things shrieks and stops moving.  The wounds coagulate.

"Now pull up file NH93445."

The injured night haunt is moving around.  It had consumed its severed limbs and the remains of its torso.  The main body has healed and little nubs have shown up.

"Astounding!  This is way more than just simple appendage regeneration.  How come they never reported this?"

"We only just learned about this from the manuscripts recovered from the lair.  As far as observations.  That is because the manei domini are thorough with killing and of course the weapons they use are utterly devastating.  Here was a precision cut made to demonstrate how resilient these things really are.  Keep in mind, this is the bioengineered ones.  The docile ones we have just been introduced also exhibit the same regenerative effects."

"Now pull up file NH11111.  Here you can see the cells of test subject 22 under microscope.  Notice how the RNA and DNA are fluid.  They don't seem to hold a specific code.  All except this area here.  This seems to be the part that allows the cells to adapt to what ever environmental effect they are in."

"So they can be killed, but if not, they adapt and change right?"

"Right.  Now get this.  ROM division got authorization to feed some of the ideas of what night haunts are to various media chains in the inner sphere.  The thought was to see what science fiction and horror junkies would cook up and see what plot lines came of it.  Holovid B rate movies such as....  Night of the living haunts.  The Thing from Turbline.  On and on.  There was fear that Stone and company might catch on, but the hash tags on the nets already existed before Corden even visited Turbline.  So the smoke screen was already cast.  The number of copyrighted kick backs from the shell company has brought in lots of revenue that went to materials for building jumpships, mechs, etc.  But that aside.  What we got were some ideas to test against them."

"That explains why the Turbline Protocol now includes radiation 'disinfection'."

"Correct.  Some aspiring director had a plot that used radiation to stop the mutagenic like adaptations.  What we found implementing their idea was that just enough radiation and that kills the creatures ability to regenerate, reproduce, and even live.  The dose a human would get wouldn't phase us but these things can't take the rads."

"Who thought some two bit horror movie hack would have helped us out."

Both scientists laughed.

"In either case the Turbline Protocol still stands.  Only one night haunt has ever been found on a dropship leaving Turbline and it was put down by the manei domini death squad.  Praise Blake.  Now the degenerate part.  We have confirmed human DNA is in fact in the aggressive species.  Pull up file NH66666.  The area that doesn't change seems to have inherited that part into its complexity.  What we have is a true chimera in itself.  The reports from all the gathered material from what they call the lair does suggest they... impregnated the dna into the night haunts."

"Blake's Blood.  Abomination even surpassing the clans."

"Yes.  I am appending my suggestion that the aggressive strain all but be culled planet wide while reintroducing the docile main strain.  A more natural Turbline native.  If you want to call it that.  There is only one problem with our observations and study.  What the guides and the recording from the wreck dropship indicate that the Baltmare continent were aggressive to begin with."

"Yes there is that.  Keep in mind that there are genetic off shoots that were separated from each other and evolution took different courses.   We have no way to find original DNA of those on the continent that Baltmare is on.  We have to pull some assumptions.  Now sum up all the reports, check them over, and have them annotated for Precentor Deback's viewing.  Then they will be sent to Heres Domini."

"Our work is going to her!"

"Yes, now snap too it.  On another note how is the wife and kids?..."

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Deback read over the reports that the scientist on Turbline were conducting on the night haunts.  The facility was setup on the plateau 6 months after the people there had left.  Many experiments there had delved into the secrets of the night haunts.  Weaknesses, strengths, threats, anything.  Another thing to come out of the research center was the application of night haunt claws, spines, and such.  Some big head came up with the idea of packing them into B and A pods.  The tests were horrifying and increased the technologies lethality by 14%.  Breeding and harvesting docile night haunts was the plan.  There was only a 5% difference in the structure of the claws between the altered and docile ones.  Enough that the docile ones would be just fine.

He was about to send the encrypted file out to heres domini via HPG, but Corden busted into his office.

"Daddy daddy!  Look what I made!"

Deback looked at what Corden had made.  It was a clay archangel that he made in school.  It wasn't the best, but what could one expect from a kid.

"It looks great.  I will put it on my desk right here.  Now go get your brother and mom and let them know dinner in one hour."

"Yes daddy!"

Corden ran off and Deback went into one of his small depressional spells.  He had been so busy that he didn't think of his master much any more.  The years on Turbline had made him the Precentor of Turbline.  There was always something occupying his time.

"Phantom Precentor Omega Deback..." he said aloud.  He had risen in the ranks again.  His status had kept him busy to the point where he wouldn't likely ever go back to the colonies.  The Corden faction was waning.  There were complaints that they hadn't been out in the periphery doing pirate hunting or bringing Blake's light to lost systems.  Even the explorer initiative had been axed by heres domini.

"We wait for The Sign."  Said deback out loud.  He was annoyed but understood doctrine.  Politics.  Same old same old.  Politics and such.  He was no politician.  He was an orator.  A doer.  A thinker.  A manei domini.  And here he was stuck at a desk.  They were weapons of war and yet here they sat becoming dull blades pushing paper.  He sighed and hit the send key with the file date of Jan 23, 3132.

His home was in Baltmare and it was a simple place.  He didn't need to have it, but a family needed space.  He thought to himself that Apollyon would scoff at what he had to own, but he would also respect what making a semi frail life style incurred.  The manei domini had softened a little over the decades in his opinion.  Back then they needed to be weapons.  Now.  Now they were sheathed weapons but also a functioning machine of the Words... 'politics'.

He had explained to Corden and Thomas that if the sign came in their life time.  Him, his wife, and his brethren would leave and likely never return.  They would go forth and enact Blake's edicts where they are needed and bring light to those that lived in darkness.  Corden had finally got it into his head where Thomas did earlier in a young age.  He wanted to be a manei domini like his parents, but the kid would need to enter the Blake Militia first.  Then as he got older he would have to show true devotion and sacrifice.

Something skittered past his feet.  One of Thomas' younglings must have got loose.  He looked under his desk and sure enough there was a baby night haunt.  One of the docile ones.  They had adopted one to see what these critters were like compared to the beastial ones.  The main problem was their claws.  But they bonded fairly quickly where they were quick not to use them.  Times had changed where they were eradicating these things and now they were selectively eliminating the bio-engineered ones.  Turbline was slowly turning back into a likely natural state before man.

Deback tossed one of the hard tack rations he kept in a drawer to the critter.  It chased after it, snatched it, then ran out of the room.  One less distraction for his duties.  He then pulled up another file that covered the Republic of the Sphere.

Kendricke.  He hadn't thought of that bastard in a very long time.  He wondered what he was up to not to mention the Turbline exiles that left willingly.  He sent a request into the system and awaited a report.

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Kendricke was at his desk in Austrailia.  The Turblines had settled in very well in the back water area of Australia.  The culture shock they had with what the Inner Sphere really was like had kept them in check.  In fact they kept to themselves because they didn't want anyone to know of their past association with the Word.  Kendricke could understand them as he looked like a manei domini with the cybernetic implants he had.

From time to time he would have to talk to Devlin Stone and the man still winced seeing him.  That was until he retired and all but disappeared two years ago.  Since then, Damien Redburn took over and he had no idea about the Turblines.  It appeared Stone didn't bother informing him of their origin and that there were refuges on Terra.  Kendricke got his stipend and the meager funds to run the office and nothing more was ever said the past two years.

He unlocked the drawer to his desk and pulled it open.  There sat the book that accompanied him back to Terra that Corden had "gifted" him.  Inside it was a note that was penned directly from Corden to him.  He had read it many times along with the book to try and understand his... enemy?   He shut the drawer and locked it.  He was still conflicted with the experience he had on Turbline.  It seemed like a dream now.  The events and impossibility of what happened.  Then he remembered the metallic arms and jaw he had.

He slammed his fists on the desk as he always had done whenever the thought of how he had acted out.  If not for him, Corden might still be alive.  Of all the manei domini that should have lived.  He should have.  He might have been able to turn him in time.  IF that had happened.  They would have had access to the Blakest hidden worlds.   But would Corden have listened to reason?  He remembered the night camp fire where he tried to put on the redemption angle and got reputed for his attempt.  Then that chair being dragged across the floor in his cell and Deback exiling him.  He wanted to say he was sorry but never got the chance.  They had dragged him out and stuffed him on the dropship.  The rest was history.

A knock came to his door and he bid whoever to enter.  No one answered.  Kendricke hit the intercom to his secretary asking who had come in.  No one answered.  He looked at the time, lunch.  He got up and his bones hurt.  He was getting older.  Upon opening the door he saw a package addressed to him.  Intrigued he bent down, picked it up, and went back to his desk.

Upon opening it he found a data chip and he put it into the computer.  On it was an encrypted file.  A password header sat blinking on and on.  Kendricke now wondered what the hell was going on.  He drew his side arm and went into the hallway.  He checked the other offices of the facility for anything out of the ordinary.  There was none.  All doors that were to be locked were locked.  All computers appeared to be untampered with.

He returned to his office and stared at the blinking cursor.  What could this be about.  He started thinking of passwords and started typing in different phrases.  Devlin Stone, nothing.  Comstar, nothing.  Turbline, nothing...  Iron Father, access.  Devlin Stone suddenly appeared on his computer and started talking.

"By the time you get this, I am unreachable.  I am a man of my word and will return some day.  In the mean time there is a matter of which you should know.  You are one of many that are part of various insurance policies.  A ghost knight would have delivered this to you in some form, so you can stop being paranoid.  The Word of Blake is still suspected to be alive and active.  I have contacts outside of the Republic that you should get in contact with.  The Word is still a threat and Obeedah and Tauseen are out there waiting to be dealt with.  Every year is a year they build their forces and it is a sleeping monster.  The houses and clans have all but given up or forgotten about them.  There are murmurs of renewed wars between them.  Ambition still exists in the clans and within the successor lords.  The Republic stands as a wall against that and a beacon of hope to those who refuse that path.  I hope my paladins shine and grow the Republic to what it should be."

"Behind the drawer where you keep that damn book is a data chip with information on it in the event the Republic fails.  You don't become utterly paranoid unless you were in Blakist camp like me.  Do not attempt to remove or view it as it is a one time message like this one.  It will also be monitored by what ever ghost knight is assigned to you.  Trust me, don't touch it as they have their own orders from me.  Contingency within contingency.  As I said, you don't come out of a Blakist camp not being paranoid.

"I left to show that the Republic can stand without me.  An entity that rules shouldn't be fixated on one man or woman to rule them.  The people should rule themselves.  There are measures in place though if some kind of failure with the Republic happens.  Measures that will be able to safe guard the republic.  If the republic should fall however...   It will depend on the situation and what you will have to do."

"Now for your role in the Blakist part.  Grab a pencil, pause this, whatever.  Write down this information of the contacts I am about to give you.  They are monitoring for Blakist activity..."

Kendricke paused the video.  He had one shot at this.  Then he realized the weight being put on him.  He would need to stay alive as long as possible.  If Stone planned on returning, he needed to live.  He was tired of it.  Tired of the mixed thoughts and feelings.  Tired of being alone in this office.  Tired of the stares and ridicule of how he looked.  He was a man of duty though and he believed in what the Republic was.  But this gave him purpose.

He unlocked the drawer again and pulled it out completely.  Behind it was a data chip affixed in place.  He wanted to reach out and grab it, but he knew better.  He put everything back to where it was.  Now where was that ledger...

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Deback read about the reports that the embedded agents had given on Kendricke and also the Turbline exiles.  His mind remembered a few of them that were mentioned in the reports.  They kept to themselves and over all didn't like the inner sphere.  The Republic on the other hand treated them fairly.  Despite Kendricke's failure on Turbline.  He conducted himself as a honorable man.  There were numerous theories on how the community would grow.  It had only been fifteen odd years.  Some of the exiles had kids at this point.  Integration with the area was a slow process.

Then Deback read the report on Devlin Stone's retirement and subsequent total disappearance.  There was no trace of the man.  Even the few agents in the ghost knights reported they were also baffled.  There was some information that Stone knew the Word was active.  That meant that they were still likely hunted by him.  The clans and successor houses though had all but ceased the hunt but were starting to get their ambitions back.  A small silver lining that the afterlife was still safe except from the one man that essentially destroyed the Word.  Did his retirement and disappearance mean that Stone was on the hunt?  Did he have the location of Obeedah and Tauseen?  Did they figure out how to jump into his home system? 

Deback leaned back and started pondering his situation.  It was time to call in some of the shadow fleet into Turbline.  If the Republic knew how to get here.  They were a threat and he needed assets just in case.  Especially with the new jumpship and warship yards.  He pulled up the super HPG network connection and sent a message to Heres Domini informing him of his thoughts.
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Re: His Right Hand (Iron Father sequel)
« Reply #31 on: 03 August 2024, 12:22:48 »
It makes sense that dynamic, might we say hyperactive DNA would be extra vulnerable to radiation, it woulf also explain why night haunts prefer darkness. It might also mean that the DNA of the day haunts became less dynamic, more stable.

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No way this could end up badly.
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« Reply #32 on: 03 August 2024, 12:59:10 »
It makes sense that dynamic, might we say hyperactive DNA would be extra vulnerable to radiation, it woulf also explain why night haunts prefer darkness. It might also mean that the DNA of the day haunts became less dynamic, more stable.

No way this could end up badly.
A well thought out dynamic i never thought of.  Side effects of sunlight on dna that is.  Might give me future ideas.  I do know ultra violet light is used in the disinfection of hospital rooms vs bacteria and viruses.  Might go hand in hand.  Species would thrive in a darker sun light planet or one that gives off more thermal than ultraviolet.  Would have to research stars and such.  Already this story had more research in it and even more than i expected.  Time lines characters.  Etc.
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« Reply #33 on: 05 August 2024, 10:39:10 »
CHAPTER 9

July 1, 3132
System adjacent to Turbline

Zaphkiel was one jump away from Turbline.  The re-enforcement of that system was her cover.  She wanted to set foot on a new Blakist world.  She wanted to see the resources, the masses, the progress.  She also had a goal.  With her she had brought a bunch of the ascended manei domini.  It was time to honor Deback for everything he had done for the word.  Three months they had made jump after jump.  It would have taken longer but the improvements Ramus had done with the Turbline KF drive cut it in half.  Finally when they had jumped into the system, Zaphkiel experienced blackness and the sucking feeling of her life was trying to be removed from her body.  Then they emerged and intact.  She made a note to talk to Ramus about this oddity.

Codes and FFL were handed out and Zaphkiels dropship made its way.  Five days later the heres domini landed on Turbline.  No fanfare was made for her as she wanted to walk unrecognized amongst the citizens there.  Even amongst her filii.  She wanted to gauge Turbline's disposition to The Word.  What she found left her wanting.  Baltmare was a pinnacle of the faith.  Blake and Corden murals were all over the place.  Teachings and lines from the book inscribed here and there.  The old stone and wooden structures were slowly being replaced to higher technological levels.

She talked to the different citizens in their taverns and sometimes their homes.  There was no fear of the manei domini here.  The frails treated her like she was one of them.  It was a renewed feeling.  The manei domini were respected in the colonies.  Maybe feared at times, but it was because of their reputation.  Here the reputation was of saviors and their sacrifice to mankind recognized.  She was fully awed and humbled by what Deback had accomplished here.  Enough that her final decision held full merit.

Then she got to see the night haunts in person.  The docile ones were a fascinating thing.  Being so close to touch the tamed ones and learning that they were kept as... pets.  So strange.   To think that these things kept mankind down on this planet and now they lived in some homes.  The christian sect that had been discovered and brought over had changed Baltmare some.  They had been met with open arms, but the night haunts they kept and regarded as family felt alien.

The research facility on the plateau was also an eye opener.  There in strict secrecy she visited the researchers there.  They had no idea who she was until she announced her presence at the end.  She had tried to calm them but they bounced to and fro attending to her.  Frails, what can you do.  Maybe it was the cult of personality.  Maybe it was her authority.  It didn't matter.  What she saw there only confirmed that the species would remain on Turbline and the Turbline Protocol would stay forever.

As she boarded her dropship to return to the main continent, she executed the orders she had been sitting on.  A message was sent out to Deback to come to his dropship when it landed.

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Deback entered the dropship wondering who had summoned him.  He entered a briefing room that held a single woman with her hood up.  He was gestured to sit before her and only when she had lowered it did it hit him.  Deback bowed his head and then raised it.

"You have done a fine job on Turbline.  I have been here for a month walking amongst the populace.  I am humbled.  I am grateful.  You have been the blessing The Word could not thank you enough for.  The resources here in this system are bringing about jumpship and warship production the likes the inner sphere has never seen.  Already construction facilities have been completed."

"Thank you heres domini.  I serve Blake and his will."

"And more.  I want you to wait here for a little bit and then you will be summoned.  In the mean time.  I want you to change into these robes and mediate on what you have accomplished here."

"Yes heres domini."

Zaphkiel left the room and Deback pondered the sudden appearance of Heres Domini.  He sat in supplication and thought about what the past years had brought.  His family.  His time in the the riders.  His conversion to the Word.  The loss of his mentor.  The time he never got to visit Corden's blast site.  He sighed.  He should do that sooner as the mop up operations still kept going on after the years.

Then something jolted Deback.  He lost site in his true eye and his left arm fell limp.  He started to panic and then gathered himself.  Fear is a sin.  He was better than that.  Focusing his mind he hit a console to report his situation.

<<"Be at peace Deback.  Mediate now on your blessings you had.  Feel your sinful flesh.  Understand what and who you are.">>  Then the line went dead.

Deback was at odds what was going on, but maintained his composure.  After what seemed like hours, a tech came and got him.  He was escorted outside onto the droship ramp and what greeted him astounded him.  The masses had been gathered.  The manei domini in front.  Turblines in the back.  To his left Zaphkiel stood near him.  To his right he recognized Precentor Obeedah Mot and the AI Aegaeon being holo projected from Obeedah.  They nodded to him and in turn he did.  Zaphkiel looked at Deback, nodded, then turned to the masses.

"Blake eleison!"

"BLAKE ELESION!"

"Terra elesion!  Mea Culpa Terra!  We are gathered here to honor Phantom Precentor Omega Deback, The Right Hand of Corden.  Here he stands as a frail.  His true blessings not of himself."

The manei domini looked at him.  In the past it would have been hate.  Instead here they had pity.  They saw him as a frail right now.

"Disrobe Deback."

Deback was startled by it and did so.  His naked flesh was exposed to the masses.  He did not understand what was going on.

"Walk to them.  Show them your corruption."

Deback went down into the front ranks of the manei domini.  He recognized them and who they were.  They circled him, joined hands, and began to chant.

"Benedictus Blake.  Benedictus Nomen Sanctum eius."
Blessed be Blake.  Blessed be his holy name.
"Benedictus Toyama Conrad, verus hom, et in Sanctis."
Blessed be Conrad Toyama, true man and saint.
"Benedictus Terra, homo canabula."
Blessed be Terra, cradle of man.
"Benedictus technologies, homo artifiosus."
Blessed be technology, the works of man.
"Benedictus manei, prausel presul Terra."
Blessed be the Hands, protectors of Terra.
"Benedictus sanctus Apollyon, The Master, Berith, Corden.'
Blessed be Appolyon, The Master, Berith, Corden.
"Benedictus Heres Domini.  Magister Cor eius Decretum."
Blessed be heres domini.  Master of the sacred order.

"What is your purpose Deback!"

"I am manei domini."

"Why are you here!"

"To bring light to the Turbline system.  To guide mankind into the destiny foretold by Blake and the Blessed Saints.  To bring the message of the Iron Father to all."

"Frail is the flesh.  An imitation of sin.  Up kept by blessings of technology where flesh fails.  Behold his blessings!"

Deback's cybernetics engaged again and searing pain stabbed into his flesh.

"Blake eleison!  Blake eleison!  Confiteor confireor filii!"
Blake have pity!  Blake have pity!  Confess confess to your brothers!

Deback felt the words in his mind.  Confession.  He remembered the words Corden had shared with him in his last days.  His own confessions of seeing things.  VDNI hallucinations.  Here he was now in front of his brethren and his Turbline family.  He felt the guilt deep down.  Always busy.  Always distracted.  He knew what he needed to confess!

"I am sinful!  I have been lacking in my own faith!  I have not kept my own word to visit Cordens sacrifice!  I am not worthy of being his Right Hand!  Mea culpa!  Mea maximua cupla Corden!!!"

The burning pain was going away.  He could see out of his true eye again.

"Misereatur tui Blake, et, dismissis peccastis tuis, preducat te ad vitam aeternam."
May Blake have mercy upon you, your faults forgiven, your life now everlasting.

"Rise as you are no longer Deback.  That past has been burned away.  From this moment on you are Zagagel.  Archangel of Guardians.  Right Hand of Corden."

Deback thought to himself.  I have been ascended!  I have been ASCENDED!  Deback... no Zagagel he thought to himself, this would take some time.  Zaphkiel started down the dropship ramp raising her hands up in supplication.

"Benedictus Phantom Precentor Omega Zagagel.  Dextera Manu Corden!"
Blessed be Phantom Precentor Omega Zagagel.  Right Hand of Corden!

"BENEDICTUS!"  Responded the the crowd.

Zaphkiel approached Zagagel.  Heres Domini saw in his eyes what had been confessed.  Saw the deep pain that was there.  She remembered the youths fanaticism and dedication the day she met him.  Here it had been replaced with something else.  Zagagel needed to go on his own missionary experience.

"Go Zagagel.  Go and see your mentors resting place.  I have heard your out cry.  You have waited too long.  I am here now to keep command in order.  Take the time you need and GO!"

Zaphkiel took Zagagel's hands and they joined in the circle of their brothers.  They too blessed him and bid him to go.  He then left and ascended the ramp and put on his new robe.  Precentor Obeedah and the AI nodded to him and then winked out.  Zagagel then entered into the dropship.  His archangel had been moved there and his team was now waiting for him.  He had been ascended.  One of the highest honors that any manei domini could ever attain.  And in front of everyone.  The likes of which was rarely done.  He had been practically elevated to just under heres domini in rank himself.  What did that mean?  He didn't worry about it.  He felt fire and conviction in his heart.  He now was ready to see the tomb of his mentor to pay respects.

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Adept Anne had watched the entire thing from a distance.  She wasn't the Word.  She wasn't a Turbline.  She felt that she wasn't Comstar no more.  This was something she would never forget.  Comstar had taught her the meaning of technology and its workings.  Here though she saw a camaraderie that Comstar hadn't had in some time.  It was a shell of itself she finally admitted.  But what to do?  She was stuck on a planet of religious fanatics who would at a drop of what they called The Sign, usher in what they thought was the right thing.

She was at a loss of purpose.  The work she had done when initially arriving into this mythical place had felt right.  Even adopting some of the old customs and sayings that The Word kept from the old days of Comstar.  It helped her integrate into their society.  She was no longer called a heretic as she had proven herself to be at least part of the neutrals.  From here on out she would have to forge her own way.
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Re: His Right Hand (Iron Father sequel)
« Reply #34 on: 05 August 2024, 12:27:01 »
Thank you for the story, it was a good ride.
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« Reply #35 on: 05 August 2024, 13:24:36 »
Thank you for a good story and well making WOB not mustache twirling bad guys.

I liked Corden, I have enjoyed Deback story.

Part of me would like a chapter 3, the story of Phantom Precentor Omega Zagagel.
or the story of Anne
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« Reply #36 on: 05 August 2024, 23:01:26 »
Thank you for a good story and well making WOB not mustache twirling bad guys.

I liked Corden, I have enjoyed Deback story.

Part of me would like a chapter 3, the story of Phantom Precentor Omega Zagagel.
or the story of Anne

Thank you, gives me encouragement to keep on writing on with part 3 which is 5 chapters by my estimate already and I am still fleshing it out and its direction.  The epilogue will be released in a few days and ties into it of course, what it might entail.  I won't publish part 3 till its done as it is my own written rule.

The one thing I wished I had wrote more about was Phantom Frela and Deback/Zagagels relationship.  It kind of took a back burner in the over all story line and was intended to make people think.  Anne as an offshoot story could be done.  Her role kind of small one but more of someone who wasn't the word looking in.  I got in the mind set of the manei domini and needed and engine that was sort of the opposite.  Aaron the Guide was that in Iron Father I suppose.

My group of players write off the WoB as the ultimate evil.  When you start stacking scales, research, and find the motivations you find a dynamic that is human yet so crazy what The Master was trying to accomplish.  STOP THE WARS.  He definitely pumped the brakes, but alas ilclan has come.

There is a part three in the works that I mentioned.  The characters are too good to not stop writing about in my mind.  The problem is I think I know where the end will take us is, but where will it end up going after that?  There is one idea that I floated that I haven't expanded on.  Wonder if anyone picked up on it.  I knew the jihad pretty well.  The next era leading up to 3150+ has been a roller coaster of finding info, reading source material, finding info on characters, and a few novels.  3145 ilclan has actually intrigued me and seeing how some characters are and their brazen actions.  The events leading up to the fall of the Republic, etc.  Some might get used, others not sure.  To say the least I try to stick to the lore and what I have read but eventually I will have to break off from lore time line wise.  I will have more questions for Habeus in the weeks to come.

Thank you for the story, it was a good ride.

We aren't done yet fellow reader.  My brain won't shut up.  I think the next one will be interesting as I mentioned a few things above.  Not sure what people will think of the next direction or the way it will be propelled, but I think it is original in some way in mechanism.  Notes will be included.
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« Reply #37 on: 08 August 2024, 10:45:51 »
EPILOGUE

Zagagel rounded the mountains corner.  The site of Corden's sacrifice was in site.  He was the first to come here.  He quaked in various emotions as he made the approach.  His choir mates followed behind him and spread out to cover any attack angles.  The night haunts had been a bane but dealt with thus far.  Here like any where wasn't safe even with cleansing being declared over.  Even though the land bridge had been cut off.  Years of extermination would go on with the docile reintegrated.  Until then, every Turbline resident still kept a weapon of some sort.

As he approached the craters edge he thought of his mentor and surveyed the land.  The scene of Corden's death was not as expected.  Something though was off in his mind and Zagagel couldn't put his finger on it.  He approached to what he thought would have been the edge of the crater but it also gave an off strange feeling to him.  Phantom Frela approached in her Seraph then chimed in.

"My dear, something doesn't feel right here."

<<"I agree.  Something just feels wrong.">>

He looked over his instrument panels and they showed background radiation was reduced like it should be after such a long time.  Enough time for half lives to decay to a "safe" human level.  That wasn't it.

"Phatom Beta Charles, proceed up the side of the mountain and give me site of the crater at a higher elevation."

<<"Yes Zagagel.">>

Minutes past as the preta jumped to a higher out lying ledge.  Then when it got to a considerable height, Phantom Beta Charles pointed down.  Zagagel processed the C3i info in his head.  The crater was in fact a crater obviously, but there was something else about it that was off.  Part of the craters symetry was missing on the opposite side where he was.  Deback walked his archangel into the crater towards the strange oddity.  The geiger counter registered higher radiation as to be expected as he went thru.  Then he entered the strange oddity and the geiger counter flat lined.

Zagagel stopped where he was.  The hairs on the back of his neck stood up.  Something was wrong with his archangel?  The radiation here should have been the same as it was meters back.  Something was out of place and his mind was telling him to keep looking.  He hoped no apparitions of VDNI insanity were going to appear.  He shook his head thinking of what his mentor had gone thru.  He backed up and then the geiger counter went ballistic.  The same levels in the crater had spiked back to where they were.

Zagagel went forward with his archangel and the radiation flat lined again.  Zagagel proceeded to investigate further.  Using the upper view of the crater and himself he started to map out an anomaly.  That is when he started to notice the subtle shape that intersected the crater and the shape of the rock.  Cold sweat and chills ran down his spine.

"Command, this is Zagagel, get Ramus the guide down here at my location.  Full environmental seal and c3i capable.  Prefer Tengu config c3i."

<<"Say what sir?  This is unusual request.">>

"I have an usual situation that requires his expertise."

<<"You do know that Zaphkiel has expressed orders that Ramus is not to set foot on Turbline for obvious reasons.">>

"I am counter manding those orders.  Something has come up that needs to be looked at.  Send two full choirs down too to this location.  Full anti infantry configs people can manage.  I want at least two malaks in dominus configuration to deal with any night haunts that show.  Zagagel out."

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<<"My my.  You were right to have me look at this.  Absolutely astounding!">>

Ramus marched his tengu along the subtle lines of the odd shape Deback had found.  Number equations going thru his head as he mapped it out.  He noted the difference in rocks also.  The coincidence stumped him as to what he was looking at and the impossibility.  By the time he got back to where he had started he was convinced of what this likely was.

<<"I have a hard time believing this myself.  What we have here is the shape of a jump bubble.  It is a...">>

Machine gun fire came from the distance as some of the celestials on site dealt with a night haunt or two.

<<"As I was saying.  This looks like a jump bubble.  This may in fact be the first natural jump bubble ever found.  On a planet nonetheless!  In fact if you go over here..."  >>

Ramus walked to the center of the crater.

<<"This is the origin point of the jump bubble and makes its way that way to the edge of the crater and intersects it.  If you look at the rocks here and here.  There is a striking difference.  Inside the bubble shape, the rock is removed or cut as you will.  Outside the bubble, it is melted.  Glassed.">>

Ramus stomped on the ground in the crater, breaking up the glassed ground.  Using his claws he carefully picked up and examined it.  Then in turn he scratched at the rock inside the supposed jump bubble and picked up some rock shards.  He carefully looked at each one and put them in a containers he had brought.

<<"Outside the jump bubble the ground is glassed as any nuke should.  But inside this bubble shape.  The ground is unradiated, clean cut, and most of all, it is perfectly.  It doesn't explain why there is no background radiation Zagagel, that is the unnatural part.  In any case a jump DID happen here.  Judging from erosion, it looks like 15 years ago.  We know what happened 15 years ago.  The other fact that must be verified in the lab, but I am going to predict.  All the ground here is pure germanium.  If this is true, as odd as it might sound, the nuke interacted with the germanium deposits and initiated a jump.">>

Zagagel felt cold with the info.  The implications were huge.  Something he wanted to voice he dared not voice.  The possibilities and the chances of happenings were likely off the charts in his mind.  He would defer to Ramus as the man was going absolutely bonkers in thought and conjecture.  Deback watched as Ramus pulled out a make shift paper and pencil.  Ramus began scribbling and plotting things out on it despite the tengu battle armor.  Somethings this guide never gave up despite being surrounded by technology.  Minutes passed.

<<"I highly suggest we leave this crater.  It is not the radiation I am afraid of.  We know this system causes instability in jump related matters and I know for a fact some of the predictors I have worked on in the past.">>

"What predictor is that?"

<<"It is what ever jumped likely gets bounced and returned.  Whatever matter that is in this bubble.  When it returns, any matter here at the time.  Well.  Would get crushed by instant displacement.  When?  I don't know.  I can try to make a prediction based on the size of the bubble and some of the system behaviors.  In short.  Yes Zagagel, you and me are thinking the same thing.">>

"Corden could return?!"

<<"You are correct.  But you must keep in mind that he was in the middle of a nuclear explosion.  The virtual sun.  Depending on the timing and chain reaction... yes it might be possible..."  Ramus paused and thought for a minute.

"Consider this.  When a jumpship jumps, whatever momentum, speed, what not, it had is essentially nullified when it appears on the other side.  With this... That explains it.  THAT makes sense.  The lack of radiation here in this particular shape.   It most likely got jumped and shunted.  But the rock never got glassed or was heated...  It is bare rock.  The jump bubble may have protected the area...  That means the jump perhaps canceled it out?  The heat energy?  I don't know.  We are in new territory.   With the bounce back though.  It would essentially be resetting any motion of anything.   Kenetic energy canceled out, but this?  Too much to think of.  I am done being in here.  Lets get out of this crater.  And Zagagel.  I highly suggest not using nukes anywhere in this system with this new found phenomena."

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Zaphkiel was on her knees praying to Blake looking for guidance before bed.  Zagagel had galvanized the Word in a different way and the Corden faction had been declining in number.  Expeditions had been sent out and pirates eradicated, but the numbers of possible targets had dried up.  Operations were stopped or the colonies might be found thru the power vacuum.  Zaphkiel thought about doing expeditions else where further, but the resources shouldn't be spent as much.  The sign for next phase of The Promise, as declared by The Master, fore told they are to wait for the sign.  Then act.  That was the problem with the situation as is.  Zaphkiel kept on praying for some kind of direction when a radio message came in for her and started chirping.

She got up and walked over to the computer terminal to look at it.  The message was of the highest priority.  Her eyes only.  It was from Zagagel.  Blake's blood what now.  It was bed time.

"Heres Domini.  An usual situation has come up that has far reaching meaning.  I am visiting the crater as commanded.  Upon arrival, there was an undiscovered anomaly.  Contrary to your orders, I had Adept Ramus land on planet under two choir guards.  Upon examination he has theorized that a natural jump point had formed in the area fifteen years ago.  The surrounding area has a high concentration of germanium and he thinks that when the nuke went off...  It powered whatever natural deposits that were here and they initiated a jump.  Matter in this area formed a shape of a hyper space bubble in relation to the crater.  See the recorded info, pictures, and video.  Please pause and look it over before you continue."

Zaphkiel was intrigued by this information.  Reading over the findings, she found her tiredness abating.  The scientific mind of hers looked over Ramus' findings and she started coming to the same conclusion what this was.  Then the religious mind of hers hit with the revelation that this might bring.  Her heart rate increased and she had to look away for a minute before reading over the information again.  She then unpaused the message.

"Heres Domini.  I suspect you have an inkling of what this means.  Ramus pointed out that whatever matter that was in the jump bubble went some where and will likely arrive back.  The Turbline system messes with things so much that it will bounce back the jump.  He told me this is essentially a natural jump and a misjump at best.  He has been on his black board back in the caves here and has been working none stop.  He has been trying to predict when this matter will return.  I am requesting his team be sent here and an AI that has worked with him."

"Now the matter that is before us.  This needs to remain between higher levels of security.  Only Ramus, me, you, and 17 other manei domini know about this.  Me and Ramus have theorized that Corden is in that matter.  When it returns.  He could very well return alive.  If not, artifacts and relics of the incident.  Ramus has kept his mouth shut from the other guides, but someone might figure out his calculations."

"I am elated and worried.  There are other implications of this find.  One is that we should not use nukes here.  There could be other reactions.  The other is the meaning of this.  Has Blake blessed us and Turbline again?  For Blake.  For The Master.  For mankind."

The screen went blank.  Zaphkiel gathered her thoughts and instantly recalled her prayers.  She wasn't getting any sleep tonight.  She started sending messages out from her computer to be relayed on the HPG hidden protocol network.   This might be something that could turn the tide of her situation and provide more direction for The Word.  Minutes later responses came in.  Panic was in the voices Zaphkiel heard.  Mass HPG failures were happening in the system.  The newly installed super HPG on Turbline had a core melt down.  All HPGs on jumpships in system were failing or frying.  Zaphkiel shook with fury as she already knew what likely was going on.  A clarion note protocol attack!  Who would have done such a thing?!  Why would someone damn mankind!  Would they be able to jump out?  What about Precentor Obeedah?  The colonies?  Would the Turbline system react to these hyperspace fluctuations?  Fear entered her as the thought about the doom of mankind might be approaching.  This was the sign foretold by The Master.  It had to be.  The coincidence of it and the report from Zagagel.  She looked at the date.  August 7, 3132...
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Re: His Right Hand (Iron Father sequel)
« Reply #38 on: 08 August 2024, 11:39:26 »
I'm not really fond of the nuke+germanium=hyperjump, KF equation is supposed to be more complex than that. While it would be interesting to see Corden return and experience I would prefer if he remains as the one who made the ultimate sacrifice for humanity and Turbine.

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Blake's blood what now.  It was bed time.

I can totally understand him, more than once I was wrapping stuff for the evening, when I noticed that some story I was following was just updated ( damn you drakensis  :cussing:)

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I highly suggest not using nukes anywhere in this system with this new found phenomena.

Herb will not like this, but then he still has ortillery, bioweapons and chemical weapons.
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Re: His Right Hand (Iron Father sequel)
« Reply #39 on: 09 August 2024, 13:40:51 »
Great story, shopsmart.

My only peeve which was unavoidable and not your fault but.....YOU COULD HAVE PUBLISHED THE EPILOGUE on AUGUST 7TH!! 
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Re: His Right Hand (Iron Father sequel)
« Reply #40 on: 09 August 2024, 14:08:01 »
The Oklo reactor is such a fascinating read

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Re: His Right Hand (Iron Father sequel)
« Reply #41 on: 15 August 2024, 16:19:58 »
I'm not really fond of the nuke+germanium=hyperjump, KF equation is supposed to be more complex than that. While it would be interesting to see Corden return and experience I would prefer if he remains as the one who made the ultimate sacrifice for humanity and Turbine.

I can totally understand him, more than once I was wrapping stuff for the evening, when I noticed that some story I was following was just updated ( damn you drakensis  :cussing:)

Herb will not like this, but then he still has ortillery, bioweapons and chemical weapons.
Trust me.  I have had many internal debates with this particular arc.  I sat on the epilogue for a good week at the end of june starring at the final product debating if I should go in this direction.  No extra writing was cunducted until I made the decision of what was going to happen.  When I made the choice, I haven't looked back because of my personality.  Once I committ to an idea, I am locked in.  Part of the beauty of these writings (to me) is that they are housed within themselves.  Someone can read Iron Father and need not bother read His RIght Hand.  It might be possible to read His Right Hand by itself without reading Iron Father.  That is something someone else would have to tell me.  The epilogue though does break that mold and gives the direction of the next segment.  So it is what it is.

In either case the material for the next segment is already written and extensive thus far as plot line, character interactions, and such.  To go back and rewrite, change, modify, etc would end up being an excusion of cancellation.  It has been a wilder ride more than I expected.  I got some bubbling pots of water that I turned up to boil that I am not sure what will come of, but the interactions from all of this I hope people enjoy.  It isn't complete yet.

Regarding, Blake's Blood it is almost bedtime...  I put that in because I felt that way soemtimes staying up till 1 AM at night because an idea came up.  Normally I am Zzzz-ing at 11pm.

I have yet to play with chems, bios...errr night haunts are bios hmmmmmmmmmmm...

Great story, shopsmart.

My only peeve which was unavoidable and not your fault but.....YOU COULD HAVE PUBLISHED THE EPILOGUE on AUGUST 7TH!!

You know how I publish.  I have considered releasing chapters as I write them this next time.  Depends on the feedback I get when posting here.  Have only interacted with 4-5 people in small discussions.  I suppose those that don't post are enjoying it in one way or another.  My only concern with releasing chapters at a time is if I have to go back and change something.

The Oklo reactor is such a fascinating read

Yeah, that natural reactor was interesting find.  Listened to some youtube vids on it.
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