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Author Topic: 2015-12-21 Save What You Can [Aaron Cahall]  (Read 1367 times)

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2015-12-21 Save What You Can [Aaron Cahall]
« on: 21 December 2015, 16:23:02 »
"We have gathered here tonight to remember the fallen."

Under the yoke of Clan Wolf occupation on Karston, the son of a renowned Free Rasalhague Republic leader must decide whether to follow his father's footsteps.


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Re: 2015-12-21 Save What You Can [Aaron Cahall]
« Reply #1 on: 30 December 2015, 01:22:21 »
Downloaded this last week, but finally had a chance to sit and read it.  VERY GOOD.  the devil is in the details, and I very much felt as if I could see the bonfire, the trains, the streets.
A conflict inside a young protagonist, and a street-level view of the warden/crusader split we know will eventually rip apart Clan Wolf.  Well done!   O0  O0
"Inside the Army, we squabble about which part of the Army gets the most stuff.  After a while, some really important general comes down and tells us to knock it off and 'cooperate.' If we don’t, the bad people will whack us and even the Air Force won’t be able to bail us out. This is called 'combined arms.' "  FM 3-0 Operations (Simple Version: "Doctrine for Dummies")

 

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