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Author Topic: 2011-06-02 Unit Digest: 1065th Millerton Armored [BattleCorps Exclusive]  (Read 1136 times)

roosterboy

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They also serve who... well, they serve.

Craig Reed shows us the 1065th Millerton Armored Regiment during the FedCom Civil War.


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I enjoyed this unit digest but ****** somebody forgot to run the spellchecker!!!
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Yeah i'd agree, spelling was awful in places.  But the unit had character, and made for an enjoyable picture of a line unit seemingly forgotten by the brass.
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The spelling is always an issue with these, which can be expected since they're direct to customer quickies, and the people who write them probably don't have the same resources as they do when they write stories.

This unit was way off the marker for me, it didn't work for me at all. The units character had no substance, it was just written, and that's about it. I didn't feel it at all and i had no strong reactions to any of the characters, whick IMO is not a good thing

There were a bunch at the beginning thatwere awesome, the very first one and the medical one, but I'm still waiting for someone to top those
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