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Xotl

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BattleCorps Exclusives (Digests, Profiles, etc)
« on: 04 June 2011, 01:18:03 »
This thread is for all issues and problems with the various BattleCorps exclusives (units, unit digests, etc.)  This is not a thread for reporting errata in BattleCorps fiction.

Please remember to follow the errata report template when reporting issues.  Thanks.
« Last Edit: 17 October 2012, 22:51:33 by Xotl »
3028-3050 Random Assignment Tables -
Also contains faction deployment & rarity info and Quirk lists.

http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=1219.0

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Re: Battlecorps Exclusives (Digests, Profiles, etc)
« Reply #1 on: 04 June 2011, 09:48:38 »
Thanks for opening this thread, Xotl.

An interesting unit with personality, but the number of errors are a bit distracting.

Unit Digest: 1065th Millerton Armored
    Page 3
          Error: "It boasts a mostly farming-based ecomony, with little mining and no major industries."
          Corr: "It boasts a mostly farming-based economy, with little mining and no major industries."

          Error: "In fact, unnoffical documents gathered from several sources can be summed up as stating “its a regiment that neither the Alliance nor the Loylists wanted to use, but hoped the other side would.”"
          Corr: "In fact, unofficial documents gathered from several sources can be summed up as stating, “it's a regiment that neither the Alliance nor the Loyalists wanted to use, but hoped the other side would.”" (four errors)

          Error: "The colonel is more intrested in planning his next party than his next military exercise."
          Corr: "The colonel is more interested in planning his next party than his next military exercise."

          Error: "Of the rest, a chonic lack ammo and armor has made the rest of the battalion suspect in any campaign."
          Corr: "Of the rest, a chronic lack ammo and armor has made the rest of the battalion suspect in any campaign."

          Error: "Over half of the tanks in the battlion are down because they lack parts."
          Corr: "Over half of the tanks in the battalion are down because they lack parts."

          Error: "A thind of the soldiers have found employment outside of the regiment, only showing up for assembly and payday."
           Corr: "A third of the soldiers have found employment outside of the regiment, only showing up for assembly and payday."

          Error: "Kommadant Dunbar is more intrested in schmoozing with Colonel Oberlin than running his battalion."
           Corr: "Kommadant Dunbar is more interested in schmoozing with Colonel Oberlin than running his battalion."

          Error: "The infantry battlion is in the best shape of the three."
           Corr: "The infantry battalion is in the best shape of the three."

     Page 4
          Error: "If someone wanted an example of the sterotypical Lyran social general, they would be hard-pressed to find better than Ludwig Oberlin."
           Corr: "If someone wanted an example of the stereotypical Lyran social general, they would be hard-pressed to find better than Ludwig Oberlin."

          Error: "However, she ened up with the 1065th because she refused the advances of a senior officer."
           Corr: "However, she ended up with the 1065th because she refused the advances of a senior officer."

          Error: "She, along with Sergeant Major Middleton, try to keep the regiment running, with limited sucess."
           Corr:  "She, along with Sergeant Major Middleton, try to keep the regiment running, with limited success."

           Error: "Although Oberlin does nothing to hinder her, nor does he help her."
           Corr:  "Although Oberlin does nothing to hinder her, neither does he help her."

          Error: "Donner has +3 Leadership, +2 Adminstration and +2 Tactics/Land Skills."
           Corr:  "Donner has +3 Leadership, +2 Administration and +2 Tactics/Land Skills."

          Error: "Instead, most of his time is spent being Oberlin’s shadow, flatteriing and helping the colonel in equal measure, in the mistaken belief that Oberlin will be promoted."
           Corr: "Instead, most of his time is spent being Oberlin’s shadow, flattering and helping the colonel in equal measure, in the mistaken belief that Oberlin will be promoted."

          Error: "Dunbar has +4 Protocol/Lyran Allance, +2 Acting/Fast Talk and +1 Negotiation Skills."
           Corr:  "Dunbar has +4 Protocol/Lyran Alliance, +2 Acting/Fast Talk and +1 Negotiation Skills."

          Error: "Tenpenny ended up ion 1065th on the mistaken belief he was a Syke Separatist."
           Corr: "Tenpenny ended up in the 1065th on the mistaken belief he was a Syke Separatist." 


          Error: "A wag once said of Middleton “God created Adam in the morning. In the afternoon, he created Sergeant Major Middleton to kick Adam’s butt into line.”"
           Corr: "A wag once said of Middleton, “God created Adam in the morning. In the afternoon, he created Sergeant Major Middleton to kick Adam’s butt into line.”" (comma)

          Error: "No one is sure why Middleton, a clearly competant and experienced NCO, ended up with a lackluster unit like the 1065th."
           Corr:  "No one is sure why Middleton, a clearly competent and experienced NCO, ended up with a lackluster unit like the 1065th."

          Error: "His posting has not stopped him from trying to help Donner hammer the unit into some sort of order, though with two incomptent senior officers and a third who has stopped caring, the job isn’t easy."
           Corr: "His posting has not stopped him from trying to help Donner hammer the unit into some sort of order, though with two incompetent senior officers and a third who has stopped caring, the job isn’t easy." 

 
     Page 5
          Error: "Ignore nor any roll results that would cause the vehicle’s destructin."
           Corr:  "Ignore any roll results that would cause the vehicle’s destruction."  (2 errors)

          Error: "If Oberlin is on the board, he in command and the 1065th units (except for the infantry) suffer –2 on all Inititive rolls and the enemy gains the Overrun Combat (see p. 193, TO) ability."
           Corr:  "If Oberlin is on the board, he in command and the 1065th units (except for the infantry) suffer –2 on all Initiative rolls and the enemy gains the Overrun Combat (see p. 193, TO) ability."

          Error: "If the HQ truck Oberlin is in gets attacked, the truck will retreate off the nearest friendly map edge."
           Corr:  "If the HQ truck Oberlin is in gets attacked, the truck will retreat off the nearest friendly map edge."


Hope that helps,
Rev
« Last Edit: 01 July 2011, 14:18:38 by Xotl »

 

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