Author Topic: Kiiro no tori  (Read 151544 times)

Davout73

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #270 on: 22 December 2012, 21:50:10 »
Hey everyone.

Just wanted to thank all of you reading for the past year or so, this project has been quite fun for me, and I look forward to finishing it.

I am starting a new job in January, so my schedule of two updates per month shouldn't change.  I know I've been ahead of that schedule for now, but two per month after january is doable.

The one thing I am interested in at this point is what, if any, maps people would like to see.  And I don't mean tactical maps, to be honest until i find a quick and easy way to do them that I like (which probably means Illustrator lessons from my wife in the near future), I was thinking more of wave maps, overview maps and the like.

As always, thanks for reading, and have a good holiday season.

Dav
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #271 on: 22 December 2012, 21:59:53 »
Happy Holiday to you too!  Looking forward to you updates!

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #272 on: 13 January 2013, 13:27:25 »
A few maps for today.  Went back and cleaned a couple of things up.

Any feedback appreciated. 

Dav

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #273 on: 13 January 2013, 16:27:45 »
Wave One Moves Map.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20First%20Wave%20Moves.pdf

Any errors let me know!

Thanks for looking,

Dav
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #274 on: 13 January 2013, 22:18:36 »
Very impressive maps you have created.
One question the world Holloran V, i thought it was Halloran V.
Just a minor spelling error. O0
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #275 on: 14 January 2013, 22:01:53 »
One idea I am fooling around with is a damage indicator based on the unit label.

The Colors might change, but I wanted to get some feedback on it.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/DamageMarker.bmp

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #276 on: 15 January 2013, 12:51:32 »
The scales are probably not going to work very well. Better to use monochromes for the different levels or no more than two colors in a label.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #277 on: 15 January 2013, 18:23:29 »
The scales are probably not going to work very well. Better to use monochromes for the different levels or no more than two colors in a label.

Yeah, further experimenting has shown the previous effort to be dismal at best.  Probabaly a half color, with a different color representing loss percenatge.  Just have to find a set that works well withing the overall colors.  Will have something new in the next couple of days.

Thanks for commenting!

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #278 on: 15 January 2013, 22:07:03 »
I think this is what I am going to do.  Just have to make sure I add this to the legend.

Next few maps will be wave and unit retreats.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #279 on: 20 January 2013, 01:53:15 »
Updated 1st Wave Results Map

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20First%20Wave%20Results.pdf

A few minor corrections from the 1st Map, if you see any other errors let me know.  Thanks!

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #280 on: 20 January 2013, 17:34:26 »
Updated 2nd Wave SPIKE map.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20SPIKE%20Second%20Wave%20Moves.pdf

I think I am going to keep updating the maps to the 'new' format the rest of this month, then pick up the narrative.

As always, feel free to point out any errors.

Dave
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #281 on: 21 January 2013, 22:56:33 »
Updated Second Wave SPIKE Retreats and PAVISE moves.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20SPIKE%20Second%20Wave%20Retreats.pdf

As always, feel free to point out any errors.

Dave

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #282 on: 02 February 2013, 17:46:55 »
Tamar

   Colonel Lloyd McGavin was a retired DCMS officer who, against all odds, formed a unit and turned it into one of the premier light fighters.in the DCMS.  Unfortunately for the Colonel, he and his troops were never high on the DCMS support and supply list, and he had to scrap a fight for every ton of armor and ammunition.  Hit hard in the first wave of Operation VALKYRIE while on Basiliano, Colonel McGavin retreated to Kufstein, and waited.  And kept waiting.  As supplies for the 5th Sun Zhang came to Kufstein, very little came to Colonel McGavin.  After months of waiting, through the Lull, and with the resumption of hostilities in June, Colonel McGavin was tired of sitting and doing nothing.  He had recruited his unit with the intent of using it on the battlefield, and he was going to do just that. 
   Realizing that the LCAF needed to be distracted, or at least given a few more problems, with the news that the Lyrans were on the offensive, Colonel McGavin took his unit to their waiting jumpships, and left the system.  Three weeks later they appeared at a Pirate Point in the Tamar system, and began a high speed drop to the planet surface.  Despite being outnumbered, Coloenl McGavin was confident in his mechwarriors abilities.  Knowing he could not fight a standup battle, Colonel McGavins troops instead fell back on what they did best, raiding.  Landing in the massive Industrial parks outside of Tamar City, they moved towards the industrial section.
   Colonel Steven Zaks of the 12th Donegal Guards was caught in a bind.  An experienced officer who has served on both Marik and Kurita borders, the 12th Donegal was his first command.  His unit, having rotated to Tamar from Barcelona, was quite green, and most of his troops had never fought a unit of the Nightstalkers caliber. Adding to his troubles was the Duke of Tamar, Simon Kelswa.  Appearing at the Donegal command post  as the Nightstalkers were landing, he demanded that he be placed in command of the defense, if not by his right as a noble but as leader of the Tamar Pact.  When Colonel Zaks objected to the presence of the Duke in his command post, it started an argument between the two as to who was in command.  Finally losing his temper, Duke Kelswa had Colonel Zaks arrested.  While the stunned officer was led off by members of the Duke’s security detail, Duke Kelswa ordere the 12th to find and engage the Nightstalkers.   The Nightstalkers had taken advantage of the confusion to charge into the Industrial section, destroying everything in their path.  The lances and companies of the 12th moved in cautiously, the thick smoke generated by the burning buildings cut visibility, heat sensors were thrown off by the fires, magnetic sensors could not function because of the buildings.
   The engagement soon became a disorganized cat and mouse battle.  Lances would appear and disappear like ghosts, lasers and missiles would appear out of the murk in haphazard fashion.  When the two sides did get involved in fight, the Combine troops almost always came out of top.  Back at the command center, Duke Kelswa was slowly losing what control he had of the situation, issuing a stream of contradictory orders, ignoring situation reports, and generally causing more problems than solving.  At one point a lance of Nightstalker mechs had blundered its way to within a few blocks of the command post, and the air was filled with the Dukes cries for reinforcements.  The fighting continued throughout the night, the Nightstalkers laying waste to much of the northern sector of the district.
   The next morning Lyran reinforcements arrived.  Two regiments of armor and two of infantry had made their way to the battlefield.  At their head was Kommandant-General Mitch Felspar, Assistant  Margrave of the Tamar Theater.  When he entered the command center and saw the disorganized chaos that was going one, he asked for Colonel Zaks.  When Duke Kelswa appeared and told the General what he had done, Felspar went outside for a few minutes, came back in with a LCAF security detail, and physically pulled Duke Kelswa into a room.  When the Duke started to protest his treatment, General Felspar quieted him by threatening to forcibly remove him from the premises.
   In the closed room, the General lit into the Duke, making pointed criticism of his conduct during the previous day, including the obvious disorganization as the result of the commands issued.  The Duke was not a military man, he was not schooled in the operational arts, he needed to get out of the way and let the men and women of the LCAF do their job.  Duke Kelswa was livid at this treatment, and threatened to bring Felspar up on charges, to which Felswpar readily agrred to.  Then he would have a public forum to lay bare the events that had occurred in the last day.  At the very least the Duke would be put on trial for gross incompetence.  Declaring he was looking forward to such a trial, General Felspar made to leave the room, but Duke Kelswa, realizing he had made an error, if not the enormity of it, made quick amends.  A few hours later, Colonel Zaks was back in control of the Lyran side of the battle.
   Using the low lying smoke to block key positions with the armor, the 12th Donegal began a series of sweeps in the sector.  When they ran into a Combine force, they retreated, often enticing the Draconis mechs into a fire sac of tank fire.  When the Kuritan troops stopped falling for that ruse, larger groups of combined units began a slow but steady advance, block by block.  There was little fighting, but the Night Stalkers did pull back.
   Three days later, having destroyed most of the District, the Night Stalkers retreated off planet.  Neither side lost much in the way of men and material, the Kuritans left behind less than two companies worth of mechs. The 12th Donegal, which had heaver mechs than the majority of the Night Stalkers, lost less than a company of mechs destroyed, it had many more units damaged.  The Night Stalkers had destroyed or damaged so much of the park that it would be cheaper and easier to destroy what was left and rebuild. 
   The Night Stalkers Raid on Tamar would be an event noone would forget in the near future, especially Duke Kelswa.  A man whose reputation was already damaged by the war made no friends with his actions in the defense of his home planet.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #283 on: 02 February 2013, 17:51:33 »
Kalidasa

   The Skye Rangers organization had not had a good fight.  Colonel Theodore Kurita had figuratively and literally run rings around the 4th Skye on Marfik.  The 17th Skye had been kept on Summer at the behest of Duke Lestrade, as paranoid as he was about being attacked he wanted a unit of unswerving loyalty to him there.  The 22nd Skye had success on Camlann, but none of the other three regiments took much joy in their performance, as loyal as they were to the Archon.
   When the orders for NADELSTICH were sent, not only was to the 10th Skye part of it, but their goal was to attack one of the more important worlds in the Free Worlds League, Kalidasa.  The Free Worlds League and Marik Commonwealth had been fighting over the border world on and off the last three hundred years, and a large amount of trade between the two realms went through the planet.  The planet had a thriving industry, and was also the home of Kali Yama mech factory, one of the largest suppliers to the League military.
   Because of it’s location, its industries, and its history, the planets militia was well equipped and well trained.  The Kali Yama Defense force was a battalions worth of Hunchbacks, Trebuchets and Orions that had been produced on site.  Also defending the Planet were the Gryphons Regiment of the Silver Hawks Coalition.  The Gryphons had a history of of bravery, but because of the byzantine procurement rules in the League, it was often the most poorly equipped and trained force in the FWLM.  In fact, it was one of the few units the LCAF could reliably beat on a regular basis.  Eager to show how well his troops could do, Duke Lestrade sent several reporters and holo crews to document the success of the attack.
   The LCAF landing on Kalidasa was unopposed, with a dozen starports on the planet there was little the Free Worlds troops could do to oppose them.  Keeping the Kali Yama Defense Battalion, two infantry and tank regiments at the massive industrial complex, Colonel Martha Zuritas, the Gryphons commander, led her unit and several conventional regiments out to meet the Skye troops.  The very definition of “Hard Charger”, Colonel Zuritas had spent the past few years whipping the Gryphons into shape. 
   The 10th Skye’s Blitz company encountered a Gryphon company, starting a six hour fate that saw the Gryphon recon company lead the LCAF unit away from the field of battle.  Using his light tanks as a scouting force, Colonel Enders of the 10th Skye was moving forward at a moderate pace, and when word reached his Command Post, and attached reporters, that a battalion of the Gryphons had been spotted near Booker Gap, he boasted openly of driving the Marik forces back.  As the conventional forces fought for key terrain, the 10th Skye charged forward.
   Booker Gap is actually on relatively flat land.  No one is sure how it got it’s name, but for the most part it was unremarkable.  The Gaston River, a large, winding slow moving body of water sat on the eastern end of the town, while the Dubauer Forest Reserve occupied the Western end of town.  A Battalion of Gryphon mechs had made it’s way through the town, and were strung out in a defensive line, their flank anchored on the Gaston.  Turning back the initial LCAF attack of conventional units, the Marik forces slowly advanced.  A few kilometers in front of the town, the two mech forces met.  For a half hour the fight was equal, then Colonel Enders started feeding more companies of mechs into the fight.  The Gryphons center slowly gave ground, then broke off, Marik mechs retreating in haphazard fashion through the city, the Skye Rangers mechs on their heels.
   While the reporters camera’s recorded, and Colonel Enders celebrated his and his units great victory, the Assault company of the Gryphons, lances of Awesomes and Stalkers, stepped out of the cover they were using in the city, and with a volley of fire staggered the Lyran pursuit.  At the same time, another battalion of Gryphon Mechs stepped out of the Dubauer, Colonel Zuritas Marauder in the lead.
   What had looked like a rout turned into a disaster in the space of fifteen minutes.  Two companies of 10th Skye mechs were down, the unit was surrounded on three sides, and if not for the heroic actions of the units Blitz Company, would have been surrounded.  The remaining Lyran mechs were able to extricate themselves after a hard fight.  What started as a proper retreat soon turned into a rout, as Colonel Zuritas and the Gryphons kept the pressure on for the next 48 hours.  It soon became a question of not when the 10th Skye might be able to retreat off planet, but if they might be able to.
   The constant pressure applied by the Gryphons took a toll on both units.  At Wahrfeld, an attack by the Marik mechs wasn’t properly supported, and the medium company leading the attack found itself cut off and surrounded by an aggressive Ranger counterattack.  Realizing her troops could not keep up such an aggressive pursuit, Colonel Zuritas pulled back, shadowing the remaining LCAF mechs as they retreated back to their landing zones and boosted off planet.
   The 10th Skye had lost four companies of mechs and pilots on Kalidasa.  Two companies worth were destroyed, the rest salvaged by the Marik troops.  Conventional losses were also very high on the Lyran side.  For her efforts. Colonel Zuritas had lost 10 pilots and a battalions worth of mechs, of which slightly over a company could not be returned to service.  However, the salvage from the 10th Skye soon put her unit back to full strength.
   The failure of the Rangers attack was an embarrassment to Duke Lestrade.  When his reporters came back with glowing stories about the skill of the Gryphons, and how a unit once thought of as incompetent thoroughly beat his own, he could not conceal his anger.  To make matters worse, the Archon ordered that the Duke pay for his own troops reparation, an order that would leave many captured troops in limbo when Duke Lestrade was killed before paying.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #284 on: 03 February 2013, 10:01:25 »
One semi minor change to the time line, the invasion of Nirasaki is now taking place in the third wave. 
36th Dieron was part of the Northwind excursion, and as such would not have been on planet when the 22nd Avalon arrived.  Luckily I can just move that particular chapter in the book.

Thanks for reading,

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #285 on: 03 February 2013, 11:31:45 »
An Operation RIPOSTE Map:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20RIPOSTE.pdf

Thanks for reading!

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #286 on: 03 February 2013, 12:29:00 »
Put the wrong map in...lets see

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20RIPOSTE.pdf

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #287 on: 03 February 2013, 13:45:35 »
Great job Davout! Keep up the great work!

Would be interesting if the FC captures Tomoe, but from what I read, that threat has largely passed.

Wonder how Comstar will take this larger and stronger FC. I doubt it would be very well.

James Tanaga

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #288 on: 03 February 2013, 16:04:05 »
Yellow Bird and Valkyrie Second Wave Movements:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20LC-Dav%20Second%20Wave%20Moves.pdf

Thanks for reading!

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #289 on: 03 February 2013, 17:46:46 »
Great job Davout! Keep up the great work!

Would be interesting if the FC captures Tomoe, but from what I read, that threat has largely passed.

Wonder how Comstar will take this larger and stronger FC. I doubt it would be very well.

James Tanaga

We'll have to keep reading to find out, won't we?  ;-)

Appreciate the comments,

Dav
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #290 on: 03 February 2013, 20:32:17 »
OK, this opens up fine in Acrobat and Foxit, but not so well in Nitro, so ping me if your having issues.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20Second%20Wave%20Results.pdf

Thanks for reading,

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #291 on: 09 February 2013, 21:01:25 »
“I hate the klaxon.  A new jump, a new target, a new fight.  Used to be I was spoiling for a fight, you couldn't hold me back.  Now, that klaxon is a sign that there's a fight coming.  Right now it's the twelfth round, and we're both staggering, and that klaxon is supposed to be the next knockout blow.  I don't know how much more of this I can take.”

From a letter written by Mech Sergeant Timothy Baines, to his family New Aragon.  Baines was one of the last AFFS soldiers killed in the 4th Succession War, during the fighting on Lee.

“Given the recent military events, there was nothing spectacular or revealing about Operation BAOYING.  In fact, given it's scope, and the fact that the Capellans were able to pull of such an attack shows how dangerous they still are.  As a nation they might be wounded, but they still have fight left in them.”

From an MI2 paper, written April 3030

“There is a particular species of reptile, that strangles its enemy with crushing force, then swallows it whole.  The problem is after it swallows a large meal, it is slow, vulnerable, lethargic.  This is the status of the new Federated Commonwealth, and how we can take advantage of it remains to be seen.”

Internal Comstar report, declassified in 3063.

“Millions dead.  Billions homeless.  Fathers, mothers, sons, daughters, dead or wounded.  Shattered economies, worlds seething under the boot of a new overlord, waiting for the chance to throw it off, and every nation doing what it can to re-arm itself to go thru the spasms of war again.  Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you VICTORY!”

Colonel David Vexey, Commanding Officer of the 111th Galax Armored.

“Taking into account an unexpected event, it will be at least a decade before the AFFS and LCAF are ready to launch any sort of sustained offensive comparable to SPIKE.  Raiding and limited strikes will be the most likely course of action.  Larger actions will most likely be counter strikes.  Given the present weakened condition of our opponents, and their present inability to mount a large offensive, a temporary respite appears to be the order of the day.”

From a briefing to the AFFS Marshalate on August, 10th, 3031.

“So we get back to Qunetin, back to the base, the barracks.  The buildings were the same, the civvies on post the same, but it was different.  There were a lot of empty bunks in the barracks, and getting back into the “peactime” routine was no fun at all.  I'd wake up sometimes in a cold sweat, see that Panther flying towards my Centy with nothing between us but my cockpit glass...I was torn..I hated what I had gone through, but god, I miss it sometimes...”

From “Damn, I Volunteered for This?”, the memoirs of Mechwarrior Cody Jones, 3018-3048.
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #292 on: 16 February 2013, 16:17:01 »
Kiiro no Torii, a Battletech AU, found here:
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Interview with a Mercenary, found here: http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,319.0.html
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #293 on: 16 February 2013, 18:20:21 »
The Lyrans really want to do a thorough job on Vega.
I wish I could get a good grip on reality, then I would choke it.
Growing old is inevitable,
Growing up is optional.
Watching TrueToaster create evil genius, priceless...everything else is just sub-par.

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #294 on: 16 February 2013, 20:31:41 »
The Lyrans really want to do a thorough job on Vega.

No Such thing as "Too much firepower..."

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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #295 on: 16 February 2013, 20:32:35 »
Kiiro no Torii, a Battletech AU, found here:
http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,7316.0.html
Interview with a Mercenary, found here: http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,319.0.html
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #296 on: 16 February 2013, 23:09:42 »
SPIKE Exploitation moves and CCAF retreats:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20SPIKE%20Exploitation%20and%20Retreats.pdf

Thanks for looking!

Dav
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Interview with a Mercenary, found here: http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,319.0.html
Every Man Must Be Tempted, a KNT Universe series: https://bg.battletech.com/forums/fan-fiction/every-man-must-be-tempted
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #297 on: 17 February 2013, 17:59:41 »
Operation POLLAXE and Andurien Incursion

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20POLLAXE%20Andurien.pdf

Thanks for reading!

Dav
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Interview with a Mercenary, found here: http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,319.0.html
Every Man Must Be Tempted, a KNT Universe series: https://bg.battletech.com/forums/fan-fiction/every-man-must-be-tempted
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #298 on: 17 February 2013, 19:30:35 »
POLLAXE results and Lyran retreats:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/KNT%20POLLAXE%20Results.pdf

Thanks for looking!

Dav
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http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,7316.0.html
Interview with a Mercenary, found here: http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,319.0.html
Every Man Must Be Tempted, a KNT Universe series: https://bg.battletech.com/forums/fan-fiction/every-man-must-be-tempted
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Re: Kiiro no tori
« Reply #299 on: 18 February 2013, 21:11:24 »
Couple of More Maps. Almost caught up to where I am in the writing!

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/DCMS%20Counterattack.pdf

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/25017377/DCMS%20Counterattack%20Gains.pdf

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Dav
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http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,7316.0.html
Interview with a Mercenary, found here: http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,319.0.html
Every Man Must Be Tempted, a KNT Universe series: https://bg.battletech.com/forums/fan-fiction/every-man-must-be-tempted
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