One of my friends who is a major Wolf's Dragoons fan read the writeup on them and said "this is wrong."
It seems to read that every Regiment has AeroSpace Fighter support, but he said only one of the regiments has ASF support according to previously published material. I don't know the Dragoons well enough to know which one, but I figured I would report it since I'm sure there are others here who know them better than me. :)
He is incorrect. WDSB has aerospace support for each regiment pre-Misery.
If memory serves one of the later source books (Battle of Coventry?) says that Delta Regiment of Wolf's Dragoons doesn't operate well with infantry and so traded in those forces for additional aerospace units. Maybe that's what he's thinking of.
Anyway, some more errata.
Page 41, Free Rasalhague Republic sidebar, fourth sentence:
The new nation built its military from former DCMS troops, but recognized the need for mercenaries.
Change to "The new nation
largely built its military from former DCMS troops,..." because otherwise you forget the Tyr regiment.
Next sentence:
The Republic shares some of the Combine distrust of mercenaries, but...
Replace with: "The Republic shares some of the
Combine's distrust of mercenaries, but..." to indicate possession.
Page 44: Illician Lancers, third paragraph, first sentence:
Change to "Each of the Lancers' four regiments..." Use apostrophe to indicate possession as in second paragraph, second word after semicolon.
Page 53: Little Richard's Panzer Brigade, first paragraph, second sentence.
...the executive officer threw out him and all his cronies.
Wow that's awkwardly phrased.
"...the executive officer
threw his former commander and his cronies out."
Page 72: Wolf's Dragoons, fourth paragraph, second sentence:
They returned a year later fully rebuilt—though The Successor States...
Remove capital "T" on "The Successor States."
Page 78: Force Building Terms, Unit, second sentence: Need a period after "etc."
Page 78: Force Building Terms, Formation, second sentence: Should the number 4 be spelled out "four" here?
Page 79: Choose a Combat Command, Force Composition, second paragraph, third paragraph: Should the number 6 be spelled out "six" here?
Page 79: Sidebar: Can you insert some space at the bottom of the sidebar? Other sidebars have what looks like one or two text rows of padding at the bottom between the text and the bottom border of the sidebar.
Page 80: Unit organizations, Armor/infantry organization:
Armor Formations can include any combat vehicle or support vehicle as well as conventional fighters. No more than a third of the entire armor Formation may be conventional fighters; however, a Force does not need to follow this requirement unless it contains more than one-third of the entire armor Formation.
Infantry Formations can include any infantry (or battle armor if available). They may also include conventional fighters, combat vehicles and support vehicles. No more than a third of the entire infantry organization may be non-infantry Unit types; however, a Force does not need to follow this requirement unless it contains more than one-third of the entire infantry Formation.
What? This makes no sense to me. It sounds like you're saying only one third of the force can be non-armor/infantry units unless your Force has more than that many armor/infantry units. Isn't that redundant?
Page 83: Rare Units section: Grasshopper and Assassin need to be italicized as they're 'Mech names.
Page 89: Environmental Specialist (Clear) Benefits List, Last benefit: Need a closing parenthesis so it reads:
"A Force cannot choose this option with Environmental Specialization (Clear)"
Page 90: New Lance (Formation) Types: Should the Killer Bees swarm lance be listed in this section?
Page 90: Demi-company, requirements section, second sentence: Should 6 be spelled out "six" here?
Page 90: Demi-company, requirements section, last sentence: Should end with a period. "It costs 4 FP."
Page 94: Captain "El Guapo", second sentence before the dash: Change "Regular" to "Regular
s".
Page 102: Right column first full paragraph uses boldly twice in quick succession:
Instead of boldly sallying boldly forth from their defensive perimeter,
Remove one of the
boldlys.