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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #270 on: 23 December 2019, 10:48:07 »
a breath before the madness

and we reach the end of 3048.  A crew of Wolverines and Colonials under the leadership and instruction of a Kowloonese from the Sol Belts is 1050 light years from home.

Elizabeth Ngo's people are cooperating with the Cylons to lift a tyrant from Kowloon without rebelling against the Lyran Commonwealth.

she hasn't grown up yet, but the child is the parent of the adult.

and the Clans? they're coming...

*dramatic musical cues intensify*
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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #271 on: 23 December 2019, 12:22:51 »
3049.
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Win's Rock Bar, border zone, Colonial City-State...

Dinh Nguyen took his time healing, and there would be a permanent rasp in his voice.  but somehow, he'd managed to keep his fingers.  The Wolverines' system prorated his tour since he couldn't be put back together in 'combat fitness'.  Instead, he got some help starting a business.

The "Win's Rock bar" name came from the fact that Vietnamese spelling simply didn't catch on with most of the Colonials, they kept trying to say "New-g-u-yen" and it was annoying.

so when he made the sign, it said "Win's", and specialized in 'home foods' that could be obtained or cultivated on the land here.  A little help from his friends and former shipmates meant a lot for the success of the place.  Banh-Mi, Pho, Saigon chicken, and so on, it drew a multiethnic clientele of Colonials, locals, and military people from the nearby base.

and he got to pursue his 'other' passion.  Music.  a coin-op player loaded with classical music like the works of Lemmy Kilmister, Sadie McAllister, Robert Johnson and a host of others spanning a thousand years of recording history.  He only had one rule;  Nothing goes in the Juke box that couldn't be played on instruments live.

His bar, his beer, his rules.

and his employees now.  Not everyone is cut out for construction or farming, some people just have a black thumb.  Dinh had five people who worked for him, ranging from Rani, a Sagittairon girl whose past life had been as an 'adult entertainer', aka professional companion, aka prostitute, who enjoyed tending bar better than spreading her legs for a pole-dance, to Eli, whose Colonial service was cut short after landing by severe traumatic stress disorder and suicidal ideation-who now made his living wage helping maintain the Kitchen when he wasn't playing drums for Dinh, to Arthur, whose term of service ended honorably, but who couldn't make it work in the civilian world without help-Art, it turned out, was an able student of the Guitar, and pretty good at scaring angry drunks.

Art's bouncer-partner was Gail, of course, she usually picked up the ones who were too out of it to walk home, confiscated car-keys, called cabs, and helped Dinh handle the books after.  Gail was, like Art, native New Circe, but unlike Art, she was also big enough to bench press Dinh one-handed and looked it.

Dinh, himself, was convinced she could do better-she disagreed, and sometimes displayed her sincerity in ways not to be discussed, in his view, in public without  putting a ring on her finger.

Thus far, said ring was still waiting for Dinh to get his shit together.  New Circe wasn't Kowloon by any stretch of the imagination, but even in free-wheeling Hue, a man's not a man if he can't support his lady financially without landing both in debt.

Tonight, is Friday night, last day of the civilian work week.  Even New Circe recognized the need for a Sabbath, though they don't call it that.  The menu tonight is fish-based.  Fish sauce, fine-sliced Mocktuna barbecue, fiery spiced bonefish sandwiches, and of course, rice.

Because rice grows well on New Circe, even here.

"Thank you, thank you all for coming..."  tonight was concert night.  Every friday, either the house band, or a guest band, playing live here at Win's. "I see we've got some new faces in the crowd, we've got some real treats lined up tonight.  a New band from the City State is on tour, they really need your support, give them a warm welcome...Kassiopiea Kassandra!!"

He gestured 'up' with his hands, and the patrons clapped politely as the small group of young women from the City State took the stage.  He hobbled off as they began their set.

Gail caught him when his damaged nerves misfired and his artificial left leg threw the balance off of his artificial right leg.  "Dean, you...have you been shorting your maintenance again?"

"uh, no.." he still wasn't that good at lying.  "just short a little this month on the scrip, needed to work the extra hours." he said.

"Extra hours..you own the place, come on..." she held him up and led him to a seat where he could relax and check the connectors to his legs.

"That's right, I own this place, and I have people relying on me.  it was either work the extra, or cut a head." he told her, "we need everyone we've got. prices have gone up on staple foods again."

she clucked, and did the diagnostic connections for him.  "You didn't mention that, I'll take a look at the books...there we are, one of the connectors is loose..."

"I don't deserve you." he said.

She looked up and flashed him a grin, looking for a moment like a teenaged girl with a crush, "I'm your number one groupie, Dean Win."

"You're my number one and only lady, Gail...I just gotta keep things balanced long enough-"

she rolled her eyes, "Not this again...Dinh, some of your cultural hangups are more anachronistic than the munchkins.  My mom's coming to town tomorrow..."

"SO you need the day off?" he asked.

"WE need the day off.  I'm tired of waiting for you to say it, we both know it.  You're meeting my folks, we're doing this thing."

"i...I still haven't..I mean, I want to, do you want to? really? I'm busted up!!"

"Your number one fan says yes."  she said, "I accept your offer of a permanent arrangement, a pairbonding, and a wedding.  Now stop fretting and stop hesitating, and stop trying to work yourself to death."
"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #272 on: 23 December 2019, 14:57:05 »
:clap:

She's a keeper all right!  :thumbsup:

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #273 on: 24 December 2019, 01:03:01 »
Mission Control, Testbed One, New Circe Shipyard...

The daily report from the Testbed One craft came today.  Seether wrapped her feelings in her image, as the text began scrolling.


Food supplies running out in 29 days.  Water rationing is at  standard usage.  We're in position surveying a Class-M world, local biology may be compatible with human nutritional needs.

Located the wreckage of shuttle 2 on the planet.  It appears to have been mechanical failure.  All members of the assigned survey team were lost, this has extended food and water supplies by approximately  four days.

Condolences to the family of Josiah Nikishima, Lauren Hammerick, and Stephen Kumar.  Please inform their families that they died in the line of duty upholding the highest standards of honorable conduct in the finest traditions of the service.  They are missed.

Joel Sebrie is still in confinement pending charges.  Mindy Gao is recovering from her assault, but without a qualified psychiatric specialist, I can't say whether her emotional and mental recovery is proceeding as well.  We may have to leave Sebrie on the planet, which maybe is a death sentence but it might also be better than he deserves.

Spacing him is still an option, but we've lost three and a shuttle so far, and we only started with twenty-five.  I'm inclined to maroon him on the planet if the local biology is suitable for human consumption.

Matsunaka's survey of the local stellar group suggests a number of high-probability habitable worlds within 20 light years of here.  Some of his observations with the radiotelescopic arrays suggest there may be inhabitants as well.  IF we find a viable food source to restock the ship, we'll investigate.

Shuttle 1's conversion to a hydrogen scoop has gone relatively smoothly, and both H3 and Helium fuel tanks are restocked.  I did a little prospecting with Shuttle 3 and found a high-grade concentration of Tyllium.  The field expedient processing work has restocked about 15% of the Tyllium we've used thus far.  similar prospecting efforts have provided sufficient nitrogen and oxygen to maintain shipboard mix at one atmosphere's pressure.

Right now, we're most in danger of internal stresses within the crew, with our second largest danger being the danger of running out of food before we can restock it.  I'm hoping the planetary survey works out, or my hand will be forced and Sedris dies before the rest of us.

In other news, the theoretical models you sent last month didn't pan out-the space-time curvature doesn't match with observations, I'm increasingly beginning to suspect there are a whole lot of accepted cosmological models we've relied on that don't apply the way we think they apply.  The starfields here are spectacular, by the way.  It's almost as if the full blaze and glory of the galaxy's been obscured from our part of it.  this has necessarily forced some additional changes to our stellar mapping files, I'll be sending those updates to your end  at the end of this message.

Seether, I love you and I miss you. be safer for me.

Signing off,
Nicole Minh
Testbed One Officer in charge.


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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #274 on: 24 December 2019, 01:13:42 »
There's always problems at the Core ... hope they don't encounter the Pak fleet.

(That might fit into "Thunderclap" though ...)
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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #275 on: 24 December 2019, 01:23:29 »
There's always problems at the Core ... hope they don't encounter the Pak fleet.

(That might fit into "Thunderclap" though ...)

One thing I wanted to make clear:  "Faster than light" communication doesn't mean "instantaneous".  At the distance they're at, going through relays, the signal has about a two to three week delay.  This means that everything Mission Control knows, is weeks out of date.

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #276 on: 24 December 2019, 03:12:46 »
Field Camp, "Sebrie's Planet"...

"it's like survival camping, only the weather's not as wet
."  Sgt. Jordan McEvedy had jumped at the chance to transfer from infantry duty to the Testbed mission.  For the last month and a half, he's regretted that...but not right now.

Right NOW, it was like going camping with his uncles during butcher season, picking out the livestock that were going to be food, but without having to worry about the Herd remaining viable thanks to it being rare.

"you know, Seth, this planet's too nice to leave Sebrie." he said over the link, as he brought the rifle to his shoulder.  "What should we name these things?"

"I dunno...Auromocks I guess.  Mock Aurochs?"

He snapped off five aimed shots with the 960 in quick succession, slaying five out of the herd of hundreds of animals on this grassy plain.

They tasted like tough beef, once cooked.  his gut instinct told him not to kill too many more.  thin the herd, don't devastate it.

Oh, and being able to do a culling with power-armor was nice, too.  It let his team bring back the bacon-or in this case, the cattle-analog carcasses, at two per man if needed.

they didn't need today.  The smokehouses that Havar and Holopoulous put up only had so much space, and the barbecue pit would get the fifth carcass once they got back to camp.

Besides, with their manpower limited, every hand would be needed for butchering work.

"wonder if Sebrie's run into anything poisonous?"  Seth asked.

"be right if he did, or if that ****** tried to eat some toxic fungus or something." McEvedy said it with genuine venom, remembering the incident.  Sebrie and Gao had been kind of a pair at first, but then things went bad.

to her credit, the Captain tried to keep them apart-changing duty watches and reassigning personnel around teh ship to keep the two separated until the anger cooled off, but then Sebrie left his post and McEvedy found him...doing something unforgiveable.  It stops being kinky at broken bones, what Sebrie was doing went a bit further than that.  McEvedy had to perform a field tracheotomy and CPR with a defibrillation unit to bring her back.

Mac knew wht would have happened if they didn't find this planet with it's compatible biology.  The Captain made it damn clear when she told everyone about her Prison experience, as she'd made clear when she deferred his airlocking.  'we find food, Sebrie, or you're calories.'

Mac remembered taking the shuttle with Sebrie down to the continent she'd picked, he'd practically run off the ship without so much as an inventory of the 'grounding gear' she'd assigned him-one fishing line, a firelighter, one three inch knife, a canteen, and the uniform on his back.

It was better than the bastard deserved.

He finished rigging his kills to the sledge, and his team started back for camp.

here, the plains joined with a deciduous forest analogue, and they worked in teams-one five man hunting team on a rotating roster with foragers and camp maintenance.  once every week, the ship's crew would rotate down and one of the teams would go up to the ship with the week's harvest in dried and preserved food.

Everyone did the rotation, except the Captain.

She stayed up there, working on how to get them home.





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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #277 on: 24 December 2019, 04:35:00 »
Sophie Marsden Clinic...December 3048

"I'm getting out."  Daphne said.  "I've been officially cleared to go home and Dad got them to drop the assault charges."

"Don't go doing something to get thrown back in!" Elizabeth chided, "Glad to hear it.  You'll look in on Penny for me?"

"You know it.  But I gotta warn you, I still have the entrance exams for Sanglamore to finish up, and if I get in-"

"If you get in, Daffy, you write me okay?" Elizabeth Ngo had really 'buckled down' after her brother's visit, but it didn't look like she had an 'angel' in the system looking to spring her from Juvie Rehab.

"I will, I will.  Best friends forever."

Liz took her finger, "Pinky swear."

"you're not worried about Penny, are you?" Daphne asked.

"constantly." Elizabeth confided, "She was in here for some bad stuff, Daffy.  I stole a look at her chart-heavy duty drugs, the kind even the delinquents I was running with won't touch, and she's been...sad in her letters."

"I'll make it a priority, okay? check up on our middle-sister." 

They hugged.

Elizabeth watched as Daphne Rowe, daughter of one of the Realm's top financiers, gathered her things and left the dorm.

"by myself again..."


September, 3049...

"You're being released." Margaret Doons stood in the doorway, and behind her, Liz could see her mother.

"for real?"

"Grab your things, Elizabeth, and come along now."

"Where's penny?"

Doons was stone-faced, silent, and then, "Grab your things."

Liz took a few minutes to shove the small number of possessions she had at the rehab center, packing her clothes was easy enough, and then, she joined the two ladies outside the room.

"You're looking healthy." her mother said distractedly. 

"where's dad?"

"They don't know." her mother told her, "we don't know."

"Is that why I'm being released?" Liz asked cautiously.

"Part of it."  Lady Doons said from ahead of them.  "Alice, I believe I will be interrupting this joyous, tearful reunion.  You have duties to perform, I will assure that Elizabeth makes it back to you when our business is concluded."

"Of course Milady."  without looking at Liz, her mother left them, heading for the car-park.

"How do you live with her?" Margaret asked as soon as Elizabeth's mother was out of hearing.

"Mostly by running away from home, studying quietly in my room with the door locked, or staying late at the library." Elizabeth said, "At least, that was...before.  Where's Penny?"

Margaret gave her a look of mixed pity and misery.  "She ran away..."

"So I'm to help find her then?" Liz asked. 

"no, she's been...found."

The Limo pulled up to the curb, and a man in Nashan Corporate livery opened the door.

"Where is she? is she alright?"

Margaret guided Liz into the passenger compartment.

"no.  She overdosed." Lady Doons said, "you were one of her few friends, Liz...maybe...maybe you can reach her." There was frantic hope in those eyes.

The trip to Tharkad was only a week.

Elizabeth would spend the next month at a bedside, talking to her comatose friend...

In the end, it was no good.

October, 3049...

a month staying with Margaret Doons at the Tharkad estate, a month staying in a hospital room, day in, day out, all over with the sound of a flatlined medical monitor.

In a sense, Maggie Doons had become closer than either of Liz's parents, bonding over the pain and loss.   "I've spoken with your mother, I'm going to be keeping you for a while longer, if that's alright."  Maggie told her at the funeral.

Elizabeth understood-she was a substitute, for now, someone the head of Nashan Enterprises could pour out the pain with, someone who could share that pain.

Nevertheless, after the service, there was work to be done.  Ngo Industries had an office on Tharkad, amusingly across the hall from Nashan's corporate outreach facility.  It was close enough to let Liz contact Walker, and get updates to forward to Patrick as a back-channel, and Maggie helped her with it, and with learning the things her father had not passed along about how to do business.

Decorum, image, the ability to seem untouchable and untouched by what is going on around you.  Liz was a voracious learner, developing a defined look.  Gone were the pastel hair colors, the wild outfits, the pseudo-rebel look that was so much a part of her identity before rehab.  Like her mentor, nobody at the funeral would see Liz weep-she'd spent her tears for life in a month, watching a close friend die in inches.

Coming to grips with what she'd known since she found the medical test results that sent her into street-delinquency.  That part of her, was gone-at least, to all appearances.

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #278 on: 24 December 2019, 05:15:37 »
[out of story]

For those familiar with previous Ngoverse stories, particularly the ones from the last cycle of refinements...

Elizabeth bonded with Maggie Doons, probably closer than she did her own mother, (who suffered from an untreated bipolar personality disorder and was maybe not the best choice to handle the kids with the husband away), Maggie provided Liz with a lot of the mentorship she would need (and later use) as Duchess, everything from how to treat employees, to how to treat with rivals.

I didn't really get into just how deep Liz's relationship with Penelopy (Penny) Doons and Daphne (Daffy) Rowe went.  In a brighter universe, those three would have been a hollywood-style 'brat pack' extraordinaire, life-long friendship, etc. etc.

Instead, Daphne wasn't there when Penny was in a vegetative state, or when she died, or for the funeral.  Liz would (quite irrationally as it turns out) hold that against her for what amounts to a fairly large chunk of her adult life.

I didn't feel qualified to 'show' that, so I 'told it'.  sorry guys.  I have trouble writing normal, healthy female relationships.

Liz's time with the Dame of Nashan cemented her specific 'look' for pretty much all time-the straight, undyed and barely styled hair, lack of makeup, choice of plain clothing made of high-quality, rich fabrics, her 'draw the eye by not drawing the eye' use of going exactly opposite of Tharkan fashions to stand out, even her cold, emotionless demeanour in public? those are things she began to develop under Maggie's guidance, first as an expression of grief, and then, as her default Image, being iconoclastic by not being fabulous or overwrought.

Those of you who've read her story before know what the next brutal influence is going to be on her.


To answer an earlier speculation: Elizabeth's motive for running away from home, was rooted in two things: an abusive relationship with her mother, and seeing/knowing the results of her genetic testing.  she knew when she went into her brief foray as a street criminal, that she wouldn't live to see forty.  Not 'thought', she knew.

She hid it well, for a teen.  by adult standards she was pretty sloppy about concealing the fact that she knew exactly how sick and miserable she would be before she died.  her parents expired without knowing that Elizabeth already KNEW.

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #279 on: 24 December 2019, 05:25:30 »
I must confess that I have lost track of the full Ngo-verse and different iterations you have created but am loving this but suspect you won't be using this as an opportunity to offer a "happier" outcome (not even Cylon/SLiE genetic therapies) but am wondering how you are managing such a prodigious production rate - do you not have anything else to be doing with your time?! also, do you have a master plan or is this just being generated on the fly?


Once again, totally loving this and just wondering how you are managing to create it so well!
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« Reply #280 on: 24 December 2019, 11:58:55 »
New Circe Naval Shipyard...

"I want to go after them."  Chloe said.  Riverson was busy installing an upgrade to the Nueva Pueblo's sensor suite.

"what? are you crazy?" he asked, "I miss the Captain too, but think about how far out she is, and how short your legs are, Chloe-to get you out there, we'd need a couple tenders, plus escorts for those Tenders, plus a mobile fueling dock.  You can want to help, and still be limited by reality."

"I know, alright?  I know, I don't have the fuel range, I don't have the jump range even if I had the fuel...but I want to go! have you seen the latest? the things they've discovered out there? the incredible things they're doing?? It makes the adventure sims look pretty tame, Jason."

"So this is more like a longing than a proposal." Riverson suggested, "you know what this means, right?"

"What?"

"It means you have a sense of wonder, Chloe." he said, and rolled his skid out from under the console he was wiring in, "That, in itself, is fantastic."

"Why is that fantastic?" Chloe asked, curious.

"Because a lot of humans don't have that, or lost it a long time ago." he explained, "If you were flesh and blood I'd want to date you." he paused, "You'd turn me down, of course, but there it is."

Her speakers warbled for a moment, and then, he realized she was laughing.

"I think D'Anna would want something to say about that!"

"I can get past the overprotective older sister." he said.  "She's not interested, just so you know."

"How would you know that?"

"Because she's been making time with Lieutenant Svedborg when she's off-duty." He said, "apparently I'm just not charming enough!"

"Friend-zoned?" Chloe asked, there was something of an altered note in her tone.

"Yeah. They make a strange couple-he's like three of me size-wise, I just can't compete..besides, she's...eh, I'm lots less interested in her now that I know her. we're just wayy too different, nothing in common.  Besides, Mom wanted me to marry a nice Ashkenazi girl, not a goyim chick anyway."

"but you're not jewish."

"Right, but that didn't stop mom from trying to convince me that was the way to go, you gotta remember, half the Boojum stations are majority descent from old Yisroel and before I got sick..."

"I don't want to hear more of this...but please, offend my hearing, tell me more! You never talk about your family!!"

"There's a reason I don't." he said, "They're boring...at least, the ones that were still alive in my when.  Shipyard work and prospecting and not a lot else."

"Pleease?? tell me all about it!"

"Well, the Boojum belts are kinda like a bunch of small, small towns..."

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« Reply #281 on: 24 December 2019, 12:13:57 »
Tesbed One, gods only know how many hundred lightyears away...


Nicole sighed, and ran the figures again.  Supplies were topped up for fuel, the docking slip for shuttle 2 hadn't been hard to convert into refrigerated storage, and it was filling up nicely with cured meat, dried vegetables, and a raw-stock grain that they'd experimentally tried turning into bread with some success.

enough to manage Buena-style Tortillas and a sweetish flatbread high in iron.  some of the leafier vegetables had seed-pods similar in taste to maize and similar in texture to Okra.

a collection of alien foods, with seeds stored in separate containers for evaluation back at New Circe-if they ever made it back.

"We're doing science..." she muttered.

The ground teams even managed to secure reproductive gametes from several animal species that looked like they might be able to adapt to New Circe's climate and biology.

"of course, we're also risking introducing runaway disruptions to that ecology." she added. 

In the long term, it didn't matter that much.  Humanity had altered the ecology of every world man landed on.

Nicole idly hummed as she worked on the astrogational analysis.  "Aperture science, we do what we must, because, we can.."
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« Reply #282 on: 24 December 2019, 12:31:21 »
Mission Control...

On the screen, they watched as Joel Sebrie was marooned, a bag containing a fishing line, six hooks, a knife, and the keys to his handcuffs dropped from the side-door of the Raptor before it dusted off.

"You know, I think he might be happier being spaced." Seether said after a moment.  "At least then, you don't go insane from isolation before you die."

The slo-scan continued, showing the results of chemical testing on local wildlife, screening for toxic and incompatible protein chains, elements, and compounds.

"Weather's nicer than ours."  one of the Wolverines in mission control noted, "Biology's friendlier too."

"Yeah...that's troubling."

"It's like Gemmenon..."

"Or Caprica."

the Colonials were comparing the planet Testbed One was restocking at to worlds they still missed.

to Seether, astrogationally, the system was a ringer for Sol, and the planet, could have been Earth without humanity.

Only nicer.

it didn't add up.  Part of her was vaguely offended at the thought of a starship crew reverting to a hunter-gatherer band, but another part was primally interested.

That wasn't what didn't add up.  "It's too close to the core to be that...earthlike." she finally said.  "There should be a hell of a lot more heavy metals in the soil, higher rad counts given the thickness of the atmosphere..."

"you noticed that too?" Dr. Baltar asked.

"Yeah.  Nicole noted it in her report...and she's right.  The place is too nice, like Baba Yaga's gingerbread hut from the Hansel and Gretel story."

"If it's a trap, we can't warn them."

"I know."
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« Reply #283 on: 24 December 2019, 16:20:39 »
And it wasn't even a mon calamari admiral that said it...  ::)

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #284 on: 26 December 2019, 01:44:55 »
somewhere coreward, Lyran Commonwealth...

"Get to the dropships!!"  Kommandant David Ngo ordered, "For god's sakes, get out of here."

"Sir, we can reach you-"

"no, you can't.  Get the wounded out of here, and get word to High Command!  This battle is over, and we've lost!"  with those words, he grabbed the manual overrides on grunttruck and forced the damaged machine to its feet. 

Autocannon: offline
LRM system: offline
Laser 1: functional
SRM system: Functional


half his cockpit was torn off, and the 'mech's sensor systems were gone.

from the open hole, he waved off the infantry, "Get out of here!! Schnell!! Macht Schnell!!"

The enemy weren't pirates, unless someone popped up with nightmare equipment from some secret Star League lab somewhere.

a hunched, birdlike machine paused in its slaughter of the Planet's militiamen as he forced his Shadowhawk to stride through the remains of the forward line, belching smoke from burning insulation and shattered equipment, waves of heat from his damaged reactor washing him with god only knows what kind of radiation.

He fired his laser at the birdlike enemy 'mech, it turned and casually slashed his wrecked machine with laser-fire, but he slammed down on the pedals, overiding shutdown warnings, and the three jump-jets, possibly the only systems on-board that still ****** functioned, hurled him forward, he reached out with the 'mech's remaining hand, as explosions tore through his machine, hurling him into the dirt as the eject mechanism fired anyway.

The invader's 'mech had a low-set, forward positioned cockpit that looked more like the canopy of an attack helicopter than a battlemech, and the fist of his ruin had smashed it before the gyroscope's mechanical forces,combined with the rupturing fusion toroid of the engine, tore it apart in a hail of burning shrapnel.

The enemy warrior hadn't, apparently, recognized his mortal peril in time, or maybe the reaching hand had prevented the auto-eject from firing before the mutual destruction took place.

The only thing David Ngo knew, was that he couldnt' feel his legs when the smaller, mini-mech monsters reached him.

but, he could draw his pistol.

the claw grabbed his throat, and he brought the pistol up, the explosions had damaged his hearing, so he did not hear the order to drop his weapon, or the identity of the force that he was facing.

All he had, was a heritage his father had tried to instill in him, a heritage he'd mocked, even rejected for most of his adult life.

"chúng ta không đầu hàng!!!"  He spat the words, as his lungs struggled with the feeling of being flooded.  The pistol was heavy, but he fired it against what he now understood was the visor of the thing.

"Bang!!"
"BANG!!"
"BANG!!"

" chúng ta không hợp tác!!!"
"Bang!!"
"BANG!!"
"BANG!!"
"Tôi sẽ giết bạn hoặc chết cố gắng...(cough)"
"Bang!!"
"BANG!!"
"BANG!!"

Click!

the final three shots went wild, the spasms of a dead man.

Point Three Morgan Icaza lowered the dead man to the ground.  The dead man's uniform was a rag, the body had been nearly bloody rags when he tried to capture it.

and the man had not been screaming in german, or english, but was clearly also not one of the lucre warriors they'd already defeated, but a Lyran regular-that much was clear.

he folded the battle claw in, and using the fine manipulators, searched the corpse. 

a map-comp, the wallpaper on the screen showing this dead man, with a blonde woman and three children who were clearly related to the two adults, and it was just as obviously from several years ago.

the dogid on the man's neck, "Kommandant David Ngo."  He read aloud.  Huh...braver than he'd expected but still easily overcome.

Morgan could not quite place why this was disturbing to him.

given a real machine, this man might have put up a real fight.


After the fight...if you can even call it that.

"what bothers you, Morgan?"  Nathan, commander of the Nova Swoop star, asked as he sat with the new elemental point commander.

Morgan held the blood-slicked dogtags of a Lyran officer contemplatively.  "We have defeated errant mechwarriors, mercenary scum, and half-trained child soldiers." he said, "And then, today, we finally face Lyran regulars, and they fell so quickly that it was like no fight at all." he looked the tags, "no fighitng spirit at all...except this one."  He held the prize up.

"You and I have both seen desperate men fight desperately, Morgan." Nathan reminded him.

"He was not desperate." Morgan answered, "He was determined, had he carried a real weapon, or been in a modern..." he snorted, "or even a decent 'mech, he might have claimed more than Star Commander Jonah.  I am...disturbed by this."  He cradled the tags.  "The world of origin listed on these...Kowloon."

"Get some rest, we still have to move to the next target for liberation, Morgan."

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #285 on: 26 December 2019, 02:25:13 »
To: Russel-Ngo, Allison Reed, Kommandant, Logistics Command Pandora
From: Personnel Command, Armed Forces of the Federated Commonwealth

RE: We regret to inform you that your Husband, Kommandant David Ngo, is missing in action and presumed deceased...


Elizabeth re-read the message.  Twice.  then she looked up at her older brother.

"Mom needs you to come home, Liz." He said, "I can't get a transfer right now, Henry's in training and they need every warrior they can get, and mom needs someone to hold her together."

"it's not home Pat." Elizabeth argued, "And..."

"And she's just lost dad, we can't be there for her, I need you to handle this." Patrick told her.

she didn't want to go back to living in that house, but..."Alright, I'll be good." she said.  "You'll be with me? she might not want to see me..." Liz told him.

"I'll bring you there, stay a couple of days, but then I have to get back to my unit." Patrick promised her.

Elizabeth packed reluctantly, and said her goodbyes.

"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #286 on: 26 December 2019, 05:53:05 »
Dependents Housing, Logistics depot, Pandora, December, 3049...

The knock came at 1500 hours local time, and Elizabeth checked the door-cam first.

The man on the other side was tall, with an earnest face, brush-cut hair, dressed like a professor.  He had a confidence that almost matched her own-at least, in appearance.

"Hello?"  she asked through the intercom.

"This is the residence of Colonel Alice-Russell Ngo and her daughter Elizabeth? I'm from the Department of Military education, Dependents services?"

she sighed, New Tutor, must be. she opened the door.  "You're the new Tutor?" she asked.

"Yes, here are my credentials?" he held out a PADD nervously.

"First job, huh?"

"Um...and you've got a reputation?"

she sighed, examining the reference letter.  She studied it for several minutes with him standing out front, before stepping aside, "Looks legitimate."  Elizabeth's records forced this-  Elizabeth's records included documentation of every disciplinary issue she'd had...

"I understand you're interested in Academy prep? do you have a preference?"

"anyone who I can get to take me." Elizabeth stated, "Right now, let's get something straight;  You're an expensive babysitter because mom's a single parent with a responsible position in the Logistics section, which means long hours and she doesn't want me unsupervised."

"Education is very important-"

"I speak four languages fluently, with passing marks at 99th percentile in statistics and analysis, I can read seven languages, and have already passed Academy entrance exams in the 98th percentile, only I'm thirteen.  I already have my GED thanks to being in confinement for over a year for drug offenses.  The only subjects I'm interested in, they don't teach to kids."

"What are those?" he asked cautiously.

"Politics and Economics, and maybe history." Elizabeth stated, "Science is great, but not where my interest really sits, I don't consider the 'social sciences' to be anything like a science, but they're an art, and I can't practice while everyone thinks I'm just a little kid.  There's snacks in the kitchenette, and I promise, I won't claw, punch, or bite you if you keep your hands to yourself, and I promised to be good, so I won't be haring off to go have fun in the slums on your watch, but unless you know something interesting, we don't have anything to do academically except you proctoring standard tests once a week to show you're doing your job, I don't like change and if you work out, I'll be pleased to make sure mom gives you a good rating on your quarterlies."

He looked thoughtful, before nodding.  "That seems fair, miss Ngo.  I'm Leoben, and I'm here to assist you in learning.  What do you want to learn? Let's start there."

Liz froze up for a second, then, "You're serious."

"As a heart-attack, Miss Ngo.  I'm here to assist you in learning, not here to force my values on you, or to try to talk down to you.  I know you've got a formidable intelligence, and a lot of potential, show me what you're interested in learning, and I will do my best to help you gain that information."

The ice in her eyes thawed, and the Two knew, he had made a friend.
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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #287 on: 26 December 2019, 06:16:55 »
So much for Nicole getting to Liz first...

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #288 on: 26 December 2019, 07:39:30 »
And she's on Pandora, which means the Falcons will also be there in a short amount of time (IRC my Clan invasion history)
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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #289 on: 26 December 2019, 08:08:26 »
Blackjack...

Superheated lightning slashed with unerrign accuracy, slagging the cockpit of Instructor-Hauptmann Frier's aging Zeus.  Henry ducked low with his own 'mech, a battered, school-owned Chameleon with the safeties removed.

the faster Clan machine leaped eagerly between the buildings.

They knew what the Clans were, at least-the information had gotten out in spite of the HPG networks being down.  The fast, jumpy 'mech lacked hands, its arms ending in long, vicious barrels or blocky missile packs, and they fired on the move faster than the instructors could even react.

but in spite of this incredible advantage in speed and firepower, the enemy were overconfident.  He was sure of it, as he snapped his right arm out of the shadow of a building, catching the speeding demonic thing by the shoulder mid-stride, and hauling him around.

at this range, Henry Ngo couldn't miss, and he stabbed the firing studs for the Chameleon's mediums and large laser-the beams slagging the fast 'mech's cockpit right through the canopy.

then, he fired his jump-jets, heat warnings blaring, and kicked up in a move he'd wanted to try since seeing it on the Solaris holocast.

he landed at the feet of a slightly slower enemy machine, this one with clusters of what had to be large lasers somehow able to fire at will in spite of heat.

He fought his controls, and lashed out with his fist, while the arm-mounted large laser of his other arm blazed into the machine for little, if any damage.

They're toying with us.

the enemy machine replied by shearing his legs off, then kicking the chest of his battered mech in with one clawed foot, the fusion plant tumbling out the back thanks to the sheer amount of armor it didn't have anymore.

armored cockroaches from hell, Toads, swarmed at him, clawing and prying at the cockpit's canopy.  Henry grabbed a vibroblade and the 'wrecking bar' from under the seat, and crawled backwards under the control panel, ready to fight.

a powered claw reached in, and dragged him out by the arm.   there went the knife.

so he tried to hit the thing in the face with his wrecking bar.

the shock of hitting that armored visor ran right into his unprotected hand, jarring the bar loose.  the Toad swept the bar away with a casual gesture, and carried him, dangling and trying to punch and kick, to a medical station.

A few of his fellow cadets were under guard, in a penned in area.  He was tossed into that area, and the alien-looking ****** finally spoke, "Treat his wounds."

Henry tried to stand, stabbing pain shot through his leg as the initial shock wore off.

he looked down, the bone was sticking through the leg of his cadet gray pants , which were red from mid-thigh downward.

Shelby caught him as blackness folded into his vision, "What happened?"

"We lost." she told him.  "I don't know why they're keeping us alive..."

he didn't hear the rest, as darkness blotted it all out.

Field surgery recovery...

voices.

there were voices, speaking a weird, clipped english.  he opened his eyes.

oh ******, I'm alive.  he opened his eyes experimentally.

he felt the restraints on his limbs, and he could see the support-cast wrapping his broken leg, the IV tubes running into his restrained wrists, and the green, gold, and black braid of a string wrapped around his wrist.

A stern man in a foreign uniform stepped up to the foot of the bed, staring at him with a cold expression of distaste.  "When will he be fit?"

"We were able to fit most of the bones back into place, with T-cell replacement? three weeks."

"That is...acceptable." the stern man said with a curt nod to a nurse or doctor in slightly lighter green clothing.  he walked around to the side, and leaned into Henry's face.  "You fought well, boy.  rejoice, you were worthy enough to be chosen as bondsman to Clan Jade Falcon.  When you are able to assume your role, you will have the chance to become a member of the greatest military force in human history, ours, I will mold you into the kind of warrior the...instructors...at this 'academy' could only dream of, and you will join our great crusade to Liberate the Star League and restore civilization to this backwards, barbaric parody you grew up in."

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #290 on: 26 December 2019, 08:38:34 »
****Aufmerksamkeit für Bestellungen*****

Dies ist ein 24-stündiger Bewegungswarnbefehl!!


Allison Russell-Ngo showed her daughter the order.  "We're being transferred to Arc Royal temporarily.  pick what you're bringing, space is limited, you have ten minutes."

It was something they'd drilled since Dad vanished, and whole stretches of the Tamar Pact started vanishing.

Liz didn't ask where, or when, she didn't even ask what.

She ran to her room, and fished out the 'go bag' from beneath her bed, the bag containing everything she would need to run away.

to the go-bag, she added the leather-bound copy of Tran Truk Ngo's war diary, and a stack of reader chips she'd taken from the post Library for home study.

Nothing else, was anything but window-dressing for her mother's friends.  The pictures of her brothers were already in the bag.

Elizabeth was ready to leave before her mother came out of the bedroom, and she had less than her mother's collection of suitcases being hauled out by a Sergeant.

"Is that it?"

"You said be ready, I've got my go-bag, it has everything I can't part with." Elizabeth replied.

Her mother licked her lips uncertainly, "Good.  the car is waiting."

The Gieneh Tripmaster flew (ish) down the road within minutes, turning to the military entrance to the spaceport, and continuing right up the ramp of a Transport dropship bearing AFFC markings.

"Where are we going?" Liz asked.

"We're going to Donegal, the AFFC is consolidating functions there..." Allison looked out the side windows, "and I've been promoted to head a department there, Your father-"

"Dad would be happy for you." Elizabeth said diplomatically.  Less diplomatically, "Did you remember your pills?"

"yes." Allison told her, holding up a prescription bottle, and rattling the contents.

"good."






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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #291 on: 26 December 2019, 11:15:16 »
Just to clarify... Arc Royal on the way to Donegal?  ???

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #292 on: 26 December 2019, 15:00:08 »
Hmm, interesting. Is Leoben going to get to go with them?

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« Reply #293 on: 26 December 2019, 18:17:05 »
Total side note: between this thread and the pho place I just found, I'm trying to learn a little Vietnamese.  The waitress seems amused...  :)

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« Reply #294 on: 26 December 2019, 21:21:28 »
It was an unforced error that would have been caught in edit.
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« Reply #295 on: 26 December 2019, 21:29:09 »
Rog... so it is Donegal or Arc Royal?  ???

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« Reply #296 on: 26 December 2019, 21:44:05 »
Rog... so it is Donegal or Arc Royal?  ???
 

A check of the map shows that Arc Royal is on "A" potential route to Donegal from Pandora, and in the timeframe we're dealing with, probably along the chain of supply to the front. (this being Pre ARDC.  Melissa's still alive, etc.)



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« Reply #297 on: 26 December 2019, 21:49:04 »
Righto!  Orders are to Donegal, with an I-Stop at Arc Royal.  :thumbsup:

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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #298 on: 26 December 2019, 22:29:13 »
Blackjack...

Strength of will is one of the greatest strengths of a warrior.  One of the problems with significant strength of will, is that of harnessing that strength from a defeated foe.

most of the former Cadets of the Blackjack School of Conflict were adapting to their new situation.  There were a few holdouts, and a few who, in spite of talents, would never be fit to be warriors for the Clan-too 'malleable', too easily swayed.  Mark, teh best of them, was already well on his way to becoming a war. 

And then, there was Henry.

The boy refused to speak english, or even acknowledge it when english was spoken.  Passive resistance but it was resistance.  At first, it seemed like maybe his head injury may have done brain damage, but a simple examination proved that was a lie.

"What is wrong with this kid?"  Warrior Ivan demanded, as Medtechs collected his unconscious bondsman from the ground, the boy's back was a skinless mass of blood.  The shock-whipping had been very nearly lethal.

"I can answer that."  Star Commander Morgan said.  Morgan was a new transfer, moved from another unit as part of urban pacification.  "he never surrendered."

Ivan was skeptical, "He was defeated."

"His weapons were defeated.  You said yourself, the boy didn't stop fighting when he was defeated-when any normal man would have given up and submitted.  He passed out, he did not acknowledge his defeat-you said he was trying to stand that first time."

"Like a Blood spirit?"  Ivan asked, regretting now the decision to take on the boy.

"Where is he from? that is vietnamese he insists on cursing you in...some german, but mostly a language only spoken on two worlds we know of, Terra, and Kowloon."

"The boy is from Kowloon."

Morgan spread his hands, palms up, "And now, you know what is wrong with the boy.  His ancestors fought against Amaris out of hate and resistance, they did not join The Great Father's campaigns out of love of the Star League, but instead, out of hatred for the Rim Worlds.  If you can not find the lever with brute force, Might I suggest another tactic?"  the Elemental was nearly twice Ivan's size.

"I am listening, Star Commander."

"Defeat his will with your mind, Ivan.  Physical punishment is failing you, so defeat him from an angle he lacks those entrenched cultural defenses against, instead of hammering at a wall, find the door..." Morgan handed him a data chit.  "In my prior assignment, we recovered this information, it turns out it may be of use to you, personally."

"Why are you giving me this?"

"because I do not want you distracted when we are once again on the advance by concerns you might have killed a bondsman you could have converted." Morgan told him, "Study the information.  the path to converting this boy into abtakha to the clan, and gaining the talents you rightly saw in him, is there."

later...

The elemental's insight was as clear as Turkina's own eye.  Ivan closed the reader out.  There was a defined opportunity there, to turn the boy from a problem into an asset.

he walked from his quarters to the medical ward where his bondsman was being treated. along the way, he procured a second reader, this one for a full-motion video that had apparently entertained the half-assed trainers at this facility.

Without a word, he dismissed the Medtechs, and sat down in a chair.  he opened first one, and then the other. 

He ran the entertainment video first.  a little girl overcoming a much larger boy in a schoolyard play-fight. 

then he opened the second file, the one provided by Star Commander Morgan. 

He waited for the vid record to finish playing, and then, he spoke.  "Shame about your sister, Henry." he said, "I'm Trueborn, we have some...equivalent to feelings of affection in a Sibko, not quite 'family', but to know that a comrade of my blood was fated to die like that, that nothing can be done? It has to wear on a man."  His sympathy wasn't mockery.  "We might be able to help with that, you know.  Our medical science is far in advance of anything here in the Inner Sphere, nobody has Cholmann's Syndrome in the Clans.  It has been eradicated.  Are you interested, quiaff?"

the boy finally spoke in English. "Tell me more."
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Re: Teaser for a proposed...thing.
« Reply #299 on: 26 December 2019, 23:12:54 »
[out of story]

I really didn't want to write ten chapters of Henry getting the shit repeatedly knocked out of him by his Falconer before they tried this.

thus, I didn't.

Moving Morgan this far was probably a mistake, and one I wouldn't make again if I were to be working on this for $$, but it works here as a callback, and he's one of my smartest Falcons in the old stories.   To wit: Morgan Icaza and Nate Roshak are genuine in their Crusader beliefs-they honestly believe in the rightness of the cause, not to 'punish' the populations who were dragged into barbarism by bad leaders, but to 'Liberate' them and bring them to the Clan Way.  It's in a way more awful than the usual, sniggering snidely-whiplash villainy from the Khartoon, because there's damned little a man who believes he's righteous and saving you won't resort to in order to accomplish this.

This is really what the writers of the second series of Doctor Who (the current series) meant with the phrase "A good man goes to war". There's actually something more terrifying about a man 'doing good' for the people he's attacking, less that he won't do to win...
"If you have to ask permission, then it's no longer a Right, it has been turned into a Privilege-something that can be and will be taken from you when convenient."